You return to me
once again
And I am lost in the happiness
of your words
The warmth of you
your presence
You arrive like a guiding light
that lifts my heart
From the darkness
of this sadness
I have hope again
because you are near
I live to see
more perfect days
I have so many questions
but only you have the answers
You say I must have faith
there is a time for us
A time for everything ...
You take me to the edge of love
so close, I can almost reach out
And feel your warmth enfold me
but there you leave me
Once again, to wonder
to hope, to wait
Saying you will return ...
But where do you go
what is it that takes you away
Why can't you stay?
And what is it
that always
Brings you back to me?
Prose: Dianne D ... ♥
Image: Serene Sunrise free Wallpaper
once again
And I am lost in the happiness
of your words
The warmth of you
your presence
You arrive like a guiding light
that lifts my heart
From the darkness
of this sadness
I have hope again
because you are near
I live to see
more perfect days
I have so many questions
but only you have the answers
You say I must have faith
there is a time for us
A time for everything ...
You take me to the edge of love
so close, I can almost reach out
And feel your warmth enfold me
but there you leave me
Once again, to wonder
to hope, to wait
Saying you will return ...
But where do you go
what is it that takes you away
Why can't you stay?
And what is it
that always
Brings you back to me?
Prose: Dianne D ... ♥
Image: Serene Sunrise free Wallpaper
36 comments:
Hi Dianne, great text for a great photo!
Ciao!!
Merci Dianne , c'est très beau.
positive, beautiful prose, dianne.
i hope you had a nice weekend and i hope you will have a wonderful week.
A new dawn, nicely phrased.
Thank you dear Franz I am so pleased that you enjoyed my words, I think the image is amazing.
xoxoxo ♡
Merci, chère Françoise , je suis si heureux que vous pensiez que mon poème était belle.
xoxoxo ♡
Oh thank you dearest Foamy for your thoughtful comment, yes it is positive, I have some hope once again but I am also being sensible.
Thanks, yes I did have a nice weekend, apart from the usual chores I spent some time gardening, which was pleasant.
I hope you had a lovely weekend and have a good week too!
xoxoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear J Cosmo for your kind words; yes a 'new dawn' on the horizon but for how long I do not know.
xoxoxo ♡
Very beautiful combination of the image and the words. Thank you for sharing you world with us.
that is
a nice one, d
flows nicely
× × ×
/t.
A beautiful poem with warm feelings return, or rather, back and forth. Besos.
Thank you dear Olga for visiting and for your thoughtful comment, I am pleased that you enjoyed both my prose and the beautiful image.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear /t.
I am so pleased that you enjoyed this prose.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Leovi , yes warm feelings, returnd back and forth, perhaps one day they will stay.
Besos xoxoxo ♡
Dianne,
i love the title....and the processus of introspection,....words with dynamism.... Neruda himself could'nt have done better!
i did read it as soon as you posted it, and i didnt want to comment as i was still rocking in these words!
warm hugs Dianne!
col
Thank you dearest col , I am so pleased that you liked the title, no other words would have been appropriate, the whole premise of this prose is based on these words ... for here I wait at 'the edge of love', not wanting to move in case I lose the connection.
It is a fragile connection, as delicate as the petal of a flower or a soft whisper, a lot of faith here, only time will tell if it will blossom further and of that I cannot be sure...I must prepare myself for further disappointment.
You are very sweet and kind to me dear col, but I am no Neruda, but I am so pleased that these words touched you as I do write what I feel in my heart.
Warm hugs to you dear col!
xoxoxo ♡
ohhhhhhhhh who are my words ????? I write you my dear dianne, you have read my words ????
Danke liebes woman, Sie haben ja die schöne gelbe vom Sonnenaufgang gesehen und gelesen meine Worte der Introspektion.
Ich habe gesehen, Ihr schönes Post heute, das ranuncula ich gegen einen Mix aus schönen Gelbtönen eingerichtet Liebe ... Gelb ist meine Lieblingsfarbe!
Licht und Liebe für Sie!
xoxoxo ♡
I once received a paper cut from the edge of love. So now I always make sure I handle it by the flat sides.
Well since you do live in Australia, I'm going to go with the most obvious answer to the last question in your post:
A very large boomerang.
Oh I am so sorry to hear that dear cyberhostage , love can cut you deeply if you aren't careful, you must stay away from the edges and enfold yourself right in the centre. :)
xoxoxo ♡
Pugsley my sweet,thank you, it is lovely to have you visit again.
Where have you been?
"A very large boomerang" you say, I was hoping that his affection for me and our friendship always brought him back...
xoxoxo ♡
liebe Dianne, dein schönes Gedicht, ganz tief aus deiner Seele geboren…
Es waren zwei Königskinder
Die hatten einander so lieb,
Sie konnten zusammen nicht kommen,
Das Wasser war viel zu tief
liebe und herzliche Grüße zu dir von Jasmin
dear Dianne ! Every day the sun rises and every day hope for good things !
I wish you a lot of good things !your words are so beautiful and moving !!
bisous
Ja liebe Jasmin , Worte aus meinem Herzen.
Vielen Dank, ist das Lied schön, aber sehr traurig ... Ich denke, für mich ist das Wasser zu tief und der Abstand von ihm zu weit ... aber ich warte in der Hoffnung.
Liebe Grüße und Dianne.
xoxoxo ♡
Your words are full of love, of hope, reflect gray days, but also of the Sun, because always after the rain, the Sun invites us to continue, to continuing loving and fighting..
I wish you days of the Sun, and to write so well..
A special embrace dear friend
from Spain ^^
eljardindemiduende
Yes dear Marty , every new day brings hope of happiness...that is what I look for.
Thank you for your kind wishes, I am so pleased that you could understand the sentiment and depth of my words.
bisous xoxoxo ♡
Yes dear Elia my words are full of love and hope, even when all seems lost I wish for happier days and I will continue to hope.
The sun shines on most days, maybe one day it will shine just for me and bring the love I can almost touch.
Thank you for your sweet words and a special embrace for you dear friend.
xoxoxo ♡
I love scenes like that.
Thank you dear Lamby , yes it is really a beautiful and breathtaking sunrise.
xoxoxo ♡
amazing photo! very well done :D
Thank you dear Tiago , yes the photo is amazing but it is not my photograph, please check the link at the end of the post.
I hope you enjoyed my prose?
Besos xoxoxo ♡
Text entry and pretty nice.
Greetings .-
Gracias, querido Enrique , me alegra que haya disfrutado de mi prosa y la hermosa imagen.
Saludos.
xoxoxo ♡
Hello my dear friend across the world..hehehe. I've been trying to spend the morning catching up on all my dear blogger friends blogs. These poems of yours that I've missed in the last few months are wonderful Diane! hope all is well for you and many hugs :)
Thanks April dear, it is so nice to see you here again. I don't get around to all of my friend's blogs either these days. I hope all is well with you and your daughter?
I am pleased that you enjoyed my poems, thanks!
Many hugs to you too!
xoxoxo ♡
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