has closed for me now
You opened my heart to love
then you went away
Just as the sunset
closes on the day
The shadows all enfolding
you took the light away
In the darkness of night
I reach out for you there
And in that lonely space of silence
all hope fades away
If the sun should rise tomorrow
should I look for you there?
Or are you gone forever
Gone without a care...
Poem - Dianne Dawes
Image - Sunset Daisies Free Wallpaper
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Some inspiration here from my dear friend Leovi at his abstract post The Last Door of Love, thank you!
54 comments:
Gosh, Dianne. You have developed into such a good poet. Tis is sad, but oh so beautiful and poignant.
Thank you dearest Foamy for your kind and thoughtful words...No,I am not a good poet, I have been silent lately, frozen, as I have not been able to find the words. I have lost my muse, my compass, you will understand and everything I write is filled with sadness.
Thanks little Sweet Pea and take care.
xoxoxo ♡
Excellent
I am very happy that my photo has inspired you for this beautiful poem. Yes, after the darkness and silence of the night there's a new dawn! Kisses.
Jest mi smutno po przeczytaniu tego wiersza, Przykro mi, ze masz takie przeżycia. Pozdrawiam.
I'm sad after reading this poem, I'm sorry that you have such experiences. Yours.
gone with the wind ! beautiful and sad !
wish you a wonderful sunrise and a fantastic new week !
Dianne.." La última puerta..."
Me ha encantado tu poema,
que incluye al bendito sol.
¡¡¡ muy bonito !!
un beso
My dear Friend
every day you write better,
these poems are amazing!
but this will not be the last door
For as the sun goes out in the evening and goes, he returns in the morning to bring us new hopes and new emotions,
a big hug for this week
from Spain for you
^^ besos
Beautiful words, Dianne!
Dianne I put this beautiful poem at the foot of my photo, I hope you do not mind. I have referred to your authorship and a link to your blog.
Besos
Nuevamente las nosdtalgias invaden tus sentimientos,tu ser no puede acogerce a ella.
Thank you dear Wong Ching Wah .
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Leovi for your beautiful words; perhaps there will be a new dawn but I am not hopeful.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Giga for your kind words, please don't be sad. This is what happens when you love someone who does not love you and shows no regard at all for your feelings.
Warm greetings
xoxoxo ♡
Dziękuję kochanie Giga za miłe słowa, proszę, nie bądź smutny. To jest to, co się dzieje, kiedy kochasz kogoś, kto cię nie kocha i nie wykazuje w ogóle pod uwagę uczuć.
Ciepłe pozdrowienia
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Marty for your kind words...gone with the wind? No, just gone.
Wish you a wonderful week!
xoxoxo ♡
Gracias querida Doris Dolly por sus amables palabras, si el sol es hermoso.
un beso
xoxoxo ♡
Elia , thank you dearest friend, for your kind words.
This poem was so difficult to write, too many memories and emotions came to mind.
I am fairly sure the sun will rise tomorrow on a new day but I know it will not be the day I am hoping for...I feel sure that it was my 'last door of love'.
I hope you are feeling better, I send you a big hug and wish you a bright and happy week.
besos ^^
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Rahul , you are very kind.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear friend Leovi , of course I don't mind, I feel honoured that you would publish my poem there with your beautiful abstract and amazing title.
It was your post "The Last Door of Love", which gave me the inspiration to put all of my hurt feelings into words for this poem and I thank you for helping me to break my inner silence.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
Sí querido Juan , más nostalgia, todavía estoy haciendo daño, pero espero que con el tiempo voy a ser libre de la tristeza y voy a poder olvidar.
Un cálido abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
En ésta parte del mundo,comienza el verano,te mando un fuerte abrazo con todo el calor de ésta época del año
Another of your wistful love poems, Dianne.
Hello Dear Dianne!
I'm delighted. You have a great talent.
I am delighted with the line.
I send greetings and kisses.
Lucia
Gracias, querido Juan , sí, por favor envíe un poco de su calor del verano, es bastante frío aquí.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Yes dear J Cosmo , yet another of my wistful poems.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Lucia for your kind and thoughtful words.
Sending greetings and kisses to you my friend.
xoxoxo ♡
Tu puedes cerrar los ojos,y con tu prodigiosa imaginación,te puedes pasear por eso lugares
Hello Dianne,
Very beautiful poem. Loved it. Hope you remember me. Have dropped you a mail.
Take care,
Loads of Love
Shweta
your words speak to my soul.
sad, but beautiful.
big hugs to you!
Such a beautiful poem Dianne,
congrats !!!
kisses for you **
And then what is love?
Sun in the morning
A mess from a friend
Beautiful flowers.. with fragrances :)
Or a tune from Howard Jones
Miss your breast btw
╮✿ °•.¸
Muito lindo... a imagem também é maravilhosa!
Bom domingo!
Boa semana!
°º✿♫ Beijinhos.
°º✿
Gracias, querido Juan , mi imaginación es prodigiosa, pero no me puede llevar a todas partes me gustaría ser.
Abrazos cálidos mi amigo.
xoxoxo ♡
Hello dear Shweta , of course I remember you, it is so lovely to hear from you again.
Glad you enjoyed my poem.
I have replied to your e-mail, just in time before my computer crashed again.
Take care
Loads of love to you too sweet girl.
Dianne xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Betty for your thoughtful words.
Big hugs to you too.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Istar for your thoughtful words.
Good luck with your exams!
Kisses for you too.
xoxoxo ♡
Thanks for your poetic words dear M , that is a nice song by Howard Jones.
I like these lyrics from the song...
"And maybe love is letting people be just what they want to be
The door always must be left unlocked.
To love when circumstance may lead someone away from you
And not to spend the time just doubting."
It is difficult not to doubt when the door has been closed and you have been locked out...however, life muat go on.
Sunshine days and flowers with fragrances are all lovely compensations.
My breast(s) are still back in my post in 2008, when you offered to keep them warm. It is comforting to know that at least someone misses them, they have been neglected for far too long.
xoxoxo ♡
Obrigado querida Inês por suas palavras doces, tão agradável de você dizer.
Boa semana!
Beijinhos.
xoxoxo ♡
Yes to hold them in my hands would be nice, soft and smooth
Lol dear M , you are so cute, yes it would be nice, all that you have said and more, but you will have to use your imagination as you are so far away. ;)
xoxoxo ♡
Belo poema...Espectacular....
Cumprimentos
Merci Diane ,
C'est un très beau poeme.
Bonne soirée.
A vida é assim, um ciclo,
uma viagem de trem e um incessante encontro e desencontro.
Quem sabe seja por isso que ela é
tão delicada e misteriosamente única e bela.
Estou feliz por Deus me permitir
estar visitando seu blog nessa viagem linda ,
onde conheço tantos amigos e (as)entro em suas casas virtual
e sou recebida com tanto carinho.
Uma feliz semana minha doce e linda amizade.
Beijos com todo carinho,,Evanir..
Sua Amizade pra mim é tudo..
Por isso sempre que puder estarei aqui no seu blog.
Si observando la fotografia,puedes llegar a pasear por esas arena,quizas ello te pueda ayudar en tus melancolias
Abrazos
Thank you dear Fernando for your kind words.
Beijos
xoxoxo ♡
Merci chère Françoise pour vos aimables paroles.
Je vous souhaite une bonne journée.
xoxoxo ♡
Tus comentário a la fotografia és casi una poesia a mi tierra
♡
Great words.
Warm greetings to you, Mirthe
Querida Evanir, obrigado por suas palavras mais thoughful, você é muito perspicaz quando ele veio para os meus sentimentos.
A vida é como uma viagem de trem com toda a sua suave viajando e os solavancos que encontramos. Há certamente momentos cheios de tristeza quando o amor se foi, mas as lembranças são uma grande compensação.
Obrigado pelo amor e bondade que você traga aqui para mim, sua bela amizade é estimado.
Beijos e carinho querido amigo.
xoxoxo ♡
Gracias, querido Juan , un paseo en la playa en un día soleado es siempre buena para animarme.
Un cálido abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Gracias, querido Juan , su país es hermoso e inspirador.
Un cálido abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Andressa .
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Mirthe for your kind words.
Warm greetings to you too!
xoxoxo ♡
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