The clock has stopped
Time stands still momentarily
I pause to reflect
I look for you
But you are not there
You are never there
Just a shadow of a memory
In the darkness of time.
You were so sweet
I would have waited forever
But how could I, without one word
One kind gesture, anything from you?
I lost all hope in your absence
In the lonely space of time.
At what moment in time did you stop caring?
You did not say, I was not aware
It was as if you left the room for a moment
and never returned
There I waited in the sad emptiness
of the void you left behind
Wondering, questioning ...
Every flower needs sustenance
or it will fade and die
You left me, wanting, needing
You once were so kind.
Now time moves on once more
And you leave me in that lonely space
That place which is your past.
I have become a forgotten rose,
A vague memory, a shadow.
Just someone you used to know ...
Prose - Dianne Dawes ... ♥
Image - Blue Sky & Flowers Free Wallpaper
Saturday, November 10, 2012
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Hi Dianne
Lovely post again....your work deserves a big compliment.
warm greetings and a hug, Joop
The solitariness can be felt, Dianne1
Excellent poem, in the good times when I would not stop at least slow the time. Kisses.
These words express perfectly the feelings wing, yes, many times I feel identified with them.
Besos.
¸.•°✿⊱╮╮
Olá, amiga!
Triste e doloroso, lembranças passadas.
Bom fim de semana com tudo de bom:
muita saúde e muita paz.
Beijinhos.
Brasil.
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Hello Dianne, I'm a little out of blogging, I have very limited time, in mine you leave the input settings and as soon I have tomepo step.
A very beautiful entrafa, making those flowers good company of this beautiful poem.
The roses in the light gives the poem love and comfort.
With love and warmth, Mirthe
Hello dear Dianna, again i loved you text, always with good emotions and rigth words, sweet and true! Its always a pleasure visit your space =)
Have a good sunday, kisses *
what a tender, beautiful, moody poem, dianne!
gorgeous poetry as usual.
i also love that pbeautiful photo you paired with it.
well done!
abrazos!!
xx
Amiga poeta.Las nostalgias se innstalaron en tu perona,y tu siempre estaras dentro de esas vivencias,tus añoranzas no te dejan elegir otro camino..
Un fuerte abrazo
Juan
Ohhhhh, look at you! A new photo of you. It's kind of mysterious with the back light.
That beauty ... where there will always love a delicious memory.
Besos.
Mi fotografia intetaba reflejar los más intimos pensamientos en sus recuerdos
Abrazos
Excellent my dear!!
As usual you make me dream,
even something sad, has a quality in all words this poetry.
I like your new picture, has magic. ^^
I wish you a great week,
I can not write slowly, but I appreciate all your comments on my blog and your photos.
besos desde España
;))
Cuándo se llega a la tercera edad,cuándo intentamos analisar nuuestras vidas,nos encontramos que podriámos haber echo algo más,pero ya no tiene solución.
Abrazos
Wiersz piękny, ale trochę smutny. Zdjęcie jest urocze. Pozdrawiam.
Line beautiful, but a little sad. The picture is adorable. Yours.
Yes, deliciously melancholy.
Besos.
Thank you dear Joop for your lovely words.
Warm gretings and a hug.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Rahul for your thoughtful words.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Leovi for your thoughtful words, yes, sometimes it would be good to turn back time and relive the happy moments.
I feel many people can identify with my words.
Besos my friend.
xoxoxo ♡
Inês querido amigo, obrigado por sua palavras gentis e atenciosas. Muita felicidade e paz para você caro amigo.
abraços e beijos
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Enrique for taking the time to visit my blog and read my poem, your thoughtful words are much appreciated.
Hugs
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Mirthe for your lovely comment, yes, I thought the roses were very appropriate to brighten the sadness of my words.
With love and warm greetings
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear friend Tiago for your lovely comment, it is always good to see you here.
Hugs and Kisses
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Betty for your kind and thoughtful words, yes, the roses are perfect for this poem.
Hugs
xoxoxo ♡
Juan querido amigo, gracias por tus palabras bien pensadas, con el tiempo espero que mis anhelos se me llevan a un camino diferente.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dearest Foamy , for your kind words, I like 'mysterious'. I wanted a new photo for my blog as its been over two years since the last photo.
The flash on my cell phone camera went off my mistake but I liked the light and I did not have to change the photo by 'messing' with it. :)
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Leovi , yes, I will always have the beauty of those delicious memories and moments.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
Juan querido amigo, me encanta cómo sus fotos reflejan sus pensamientos y sentimientos más íntimos.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Juan querido amigo, creo que a cualquier edad cuando analizamos nuestra vida nos damos cuenta de que podríamos haber hecho más, pero nunca es demasiado tarde para conseguir un poco de disfrute de la vida.
Amor y abrazos
xoxoxo ♡
Elia dearest friend, thank you for your kind and thoughtful words. I am pleased that you like my photo, I like to think that my picture has magic. :) ^^
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
Giga drogi przyjacielu, dziękuję za miłe słowa, tak, róże są piękne.
ciepłe pozdrowienia
Giga dear friend, thank you for your kind words, yes, the roses are beautiful.
Warm greetings
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Leovi , I am pleased that you find it so.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
Veo te gustan los espacios abiero y con un color azul.
En Otoño se pueden sacar fotografias con bellos colores
Abrazos
Love fades, but it may take a lifetime.
Besos.
Dianne Muy admirable su Poema es un placerpasar por su blog.
Saludos desde Creatividad e imaginación fotos de José Ramón
sad and beautiful ! hope a light will shine above you like on your photo ! nice to see you Dianne !
a wish you a lovely quiet weekend
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Bom fim de semana, amiga!
Beijinhos.
Brasil.
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Olá Dianne,
não sei ler nem falar muito bem em inglês. Apenas improviso alguma coisa, mas hoje lendo seu poema senti a força dos versos! Parabéns pelo texto e uma bela semana. Um grande abraço
Excellent and amazing, i love it!
Gracias querido Juan , sí, me encantan los espacios abiertos del cielo azul y aire puro.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Leovi , yes love does fade but it can take a lifetime to forget.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
Querido amigo José , muchas gracias por su amable y palabras bien pensadas.
Saludos cordiales de mi amigo.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Marty for your kind and thoughtful words, yes, I hope some light will shine for me soon.
Have a lovely week!
Bisous
xoxoxo ♡
Obrigada querida Inês , uma boa semana para você também meu amigo.
beijos .•°✿⊱
xoxoxo ♡
Olá caro Antonio . Eu falo e entendo muito pouco da língua de Portugal, apenas algumas palavras e frases. Espero que com a ajuda do tradutor você fosse capaz de compreender algumas das palavras de meu poema e do sentimento que eu estava tentando transmitir ... Eu percebo que o tradutor não é precisa e muito é deixado para a interpretação do leitor . Obrigado por seu comentário pensativa e eu também desejo-lhe uma boa semana.
Saudações meu amigo.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Art for your kind and thoughtful words.
xoxoxo ♡
Bonita, a delicious rose forgotten ...
Besos.
Thank you dear Leovi for your kind words. A delicious rose? Obviously he does not find me so, he has been absent for some time.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
Happy Week for you Dianne !!!
Here with cold but with sun...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fl4q2WBCywg
this is a little present for you:
kisses
^^
El aroma de una rosa y el olor de una mujer son perfumenes para los hombres.
Nuevamente te agradezco tus constancias en las entradas a mi blog.
Saludos
Beautiful memories that illuminate our melancholy.
Besos.
I really like what and how you edit the blog. Show of poetry! hug
Tus poemas están llegan a los sentiumientos de tus amigos.
Un fuerte abrazo
Hello dear Friend =D
Its always good come here and read your lovely text, full of emotion, trues and live!
You know how to impress us, well done, big kiss =D
Yes, love must be fed, or just the memories remain.
Besos.
Thank you Elia dearest friend for your kind wishes and for the lovely Robbie Williams song.
besos
xoxoxo ♡
Gracias, querido Juan , sí, el dulce aroma de una mujer y la de una rosa es un perfume que los hombres deben atesorar siempre.
Abrazos mi amigo romántica.
xoxoxo ♡
Ustedes son bienvenidos querido Juan , me encantan tus composiciones y fantasías.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Leovi yes beautiful memories but they also bring longing and pain...perhaps it would be better to forget.
Besos
xoxoxo
Thank you dear tossan for your kind words; a hug for you too.
xoxoxo ♡
Juan querido amigo, yo no quiero que alguien se sienta triste, estoy triste, estoy expresando mis sentimientos en palabras de un poema, tratando de entender por qué me ha abandonado.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Hello, Tiago dear friend, thank you for your kind words, I don't know that my poems impress, I think I am making everyone sad...perhaps it is time to stop.
A big hug and kiss for you too!
xoxoxo ♡
Thanks dear Leovi that is so true but I was the one who loved, he did not love me, all I have are memories.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
This piece is so sad and lonely Mum. You know I love my little Blousey xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Thank you so much for your lovely words my Darling Girl , yes I know you love me, I love you too, what a beautiful daughter you are.
Yes, sad and lonely, and I am even more sad and lonely now because I am a romantic fool and I always get it wrong.
Love from your sad little Blousey.
xoxoxo ♡
Too good! It touched my heart !
Thank you dear Stuti for your thoughtful words, so kind of you.
xoxoxo ♡
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