Saturday, November 10, 2012

Forgotten ...

The clock has stopped
Time stands still momentarily
I pause to reflect
I look for you
But you are not there
You are never there
Just a shadow of a memory
In the darkness of time.
You were so sweet
I would have waited forever
But how could I, without one word
One kind gesture, anything from you?
I lost all hope in your absence
In the lonely space of time.
At what moment in time did you stop caring?
You did not say, I was not aware
It was as if you left the room for a moment
and never returned
There I waited in the sad emptiness
of the void you left behind 
Wondering, questioning ...
Every flower needs sustenance
or it will fade and die
You left me, wanting, needing 
You once were so kind.
Now time moves on once more
And you leave me in that lonely space
That place which is your past.
I have become a forgotten rose, 
A vague memory, a shadow.
Just someone you used to know ...

Prose - Dianne Dawes ... ♥
Image - Blue Sky & Flowers Free Wallpaper


71 comments:

Joop Zand said...

Hi Dianne

Lovely post again....your work deserves a big compliment.

warm greetings and a hug, Joop

Rahul Bhatia said...

The solitariness can be felt, Dianne1

Leovi said...

Excellent poem, in the good times when I would not stop at least slow the time. Kisses.

Leovi said...

These words express perfectly the feelings wing, yes, many times I feel identified with them.
Besos.

Magia da Inês said...

¸.•°✿⊱╮╮
Olá, amiga!
Triste e doloroso, lembranças passadas.

Bom fim de semana com tudo de bom:
muita saúde e muita paz.
Beijinhos.
Brasil.
.•°✿⊱╮•°✿⊱

Enrique G.A. said...

Hello Dianne, I'm a little out of blogging, I have very limited time, in mine you leave the input settings and as soon I have tomepo step.
A very beautiful entrafa, making those flowers good company of this beautiful poem.

Mirthe Duindam said...

The roses in the light gives the poem love and comfort.
With love and warmth, Mirthe

Tiago Braga said...

Hello dear Dianna, again i loved you text, always with good emotions and rigth words, sweet and true! Its always a pleasure visit your space =)

Have a good sunday, kisses *

Betty Manousos said...

what a tender, beautiful, moody poem, dianne!

gorgeous poetry as usual.
i also love that pbeautiful photo you paired with it.

well done!

abrazos!!
xx

JUAN FUENTES said...

Amiga poeta.Las nostalgias se innstalaron en tu perona,y tu siempre estaras dentro de esas vivencias,tus añoranzas no te dejan elegir otro camino..
Un fuerte abrazo
Juan

foam said...

Ohhhhh, look at you! A new photo of you. It's kind of mysterious with the back light.

Leovi said...

That beauty ... where there will always love a delicious memory.
Besos.

JUAN FUENTES said...

Mi fotografia intetaba reflejar los más intimos pensamientos en sus recuerdos
Abrazos

Elia said...

Excellent my dear!!
As usual you make me dream,
even something sad, has a quality in all words this poetry.

I like your new picture, has magic. ^^
I wish you a great week,
I can not write slowly, but I appreciate all your comments on my blog and your photos.

besos desde España

;))

JUAN FUENTES said...

Cuándo se llega a la tercera edad,cuándo intentamos analisar nuuestras vidas,nos encontramos que podriámos haber echo algo más,pero ya no tiene solución.
Abrazos

Giga said...

Wiersz piękny, ale trochę smutny. Zdjęcie jest urocze. Pozdrawiam.
Line beautiful, but a little sad. The picture is adorable. Yours.

Leovi said...

Yes, deliciously melancholy.
Besos.

dianne said...

Thank you dear Joop for your lovely words.
Warm gretings and a hug.
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Thank you dear Rahul for your thoughtful words.
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Thank you dear Leovi for your thoughtful words, yes, sometimes it would be good to turn back time and relive the happy moments.
I feel many people can identify with my words.
Besos my friend.
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Inês querido amigo, obrigado por sua palavras gentis e atenciosas. Muita felicidade e paz para você caro amigo.
abraços e beijos
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Thank you dear Enrique for taking the time to visit my blog and read my poem, your thoughtful words are much appreciated.
Hugs
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Thank you dear Mirthe for your lovely comment, yes, I thought the roses were very appropriate to brighten the sadness of my words.
With love and warm greetings
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Thank you dear friend Tiago for your lovely comment, it is always good to see you here.
Hugs and Kisses
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Thank you dear Betty for your kind and thoughtful words, yes, the roses are perfect for this poem.
Hugs
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Juan querido amigo, gracias por tus palabras bien pensadas, con el tiempo espero que mis anhelos se me llevan a un camino diferente.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Thank you dearest Foamy , for your kind words, I like 'mysterious'. I wanted a new photo for my blog as its been over two years since the last photo.
The flash on my cell phone camera went off my mistake but I liked the light and I did not have to change the photo by 'messing' with it. :)

xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Thank you dear Leovi , yes, I will always have the beauty of those delicious memories and moments.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Juan querido amigo, me encanta cómo sus fotos reflejan sus pensamientos y sentimientos más íntimos.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Juan querido amigo, creo que a cualquier edad cuando analizamos nuestra vida nos damos cuenta de que podríamos haber hecho más, pero nunca es demasiado tarde para conseguir un poco de disfrute de la vida.
Amor y abrazos
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Elia dearest friend, thank you for your kind and thoughtful words. I am pleased that you like my photo, I like to think that my picture has magic. :) ^^
Besos
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Giga drogi przyjacielu, dziękuję za miłe słowa, tak, róże są piękne.
ciepłe pozdrowienia

Giga dear friend, thank you for your kind words, yes, the roses are beautiful.
Warm greetings
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Thank you dear Leovi , I am pleased that you find it so.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡

JUAN FUENTES said...

Veo te gustan los espacios abiero y con un color azul.
En Otoño se pueden sacar fotografias con bellos colores
Abrazos

Leovi said...

Love fades, but it may take a lifetime.

Besos.

José Ramón said...

Dianne Muy admirable su Poema es un placerpasar por su blog.

Saludos desde Creatividad e imaginación fotos de José Ramón

Marty said...

sad and beautiful ! hope a light will shine above you like on your photo ! nice to see you Dianne !
a wish you a lovely quiet weekend

Magia da Inês said...

¸.•°✿⊱╮

Bom fim de semana, amiga!
Beijinhos.
Brasil.
¸.•°✿⊱╮
✿ °•.¸

Antonio Machado said...

Olá Dianne,
não sei ler nem falar muito bem em inglês. Apenas improviso alguma coisa, mas hoje lendo seu poema senti a força dos versos! Parabéns pelo texto e uma bela semana. Um grande abraço

Art said...

Excellent and amazing, i love it!

dianne said...

Gracias querido Juan , sí, me encantan los espacios abiertos del cielo azul y aire puro.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Thank you dear Leovi , yes love does fade but it can take a lifetime to forget.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Querido amigo José , muchas gracias por su amable y palabras bien pensadas.
Saludos cordiales de mi amigo.
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Thank you dear Marty for your kind and thoughtful words, yes, I hope some light will shine for me soon.
Have a lovely week!
Bisous
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Obrigada querida Inês , uma boa semana para você também meu amigo.
beijos .•°✿⊱
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Olá caro Antonio . Eu falo e entendo muito pouco da língua de Portugal, apenas algumas palavras e frases. Espero que com a ajuda do tradutor você fosse capaz de compreender algumas das palavras de meu poema e do sentimento que eu estava tentando transmitir ... Eu percebo que o tradutor não é precisa e muito é deixado para a interpretação do leitor . Obrigado por seu comentário pensativa e eu também desejo-lhe uma boa semana.
Saudações meu amigo.
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Thank you dear Art for your kind and thoughtful words.
xoxoxo ♡

Leovi said...

Bonita, a delicious rose forgotten ...
Besos.

dianne said...

Thank you dear Leovi for your kind words. A delicious rose? Obviously he does not find me so, he has been absent for some time.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡

Elia said...

Happy Week for you Dianne !!!
Here with cold but with sun...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fl4q2WBCywg

this is a little present for you:


kisses

^^

JUAN FUENTES said...

El aroma de una rosa y el olor de una mujer son perfumenes para los hombres.

JUAN FUENTES said...

Nuevamente te agradezco tus constancias en las entradas a mi blog.
Saludos

Leovi said...

Beautiful memories that illuminate our melancholy.
Besos.

:.tossan® said...

I really like what and how you edit the blog. Show of poetry! hug

JUAN FUENTES said...

Tus poemas están llegan a los sentiumientos de tus amigos.

Un fuerte abrazo

Tiago Braga said...

Hello dear Friend =D

Its always good come here and read your lovely text, full of emotion, trues and live!

You know how to impress us, well done, big kiss =D

Leovi said...

Yes, love must be fed, or just the memories remain.
Besos.

dianne said...

Thank you Elia dearest friend for your kind wishes and for the lovely Robbie Williams song.
besos
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Gracias, querido Juan , sí, el dulce aroma de una mujer y la de una rosa es un perfume que los hombres deben atesorar siempre.
Abrazos mi amigo romántica.
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Ustedes son bienvenidos querido Juan , me encantan tus composiciones y fantasías.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Thank you dear Leovi yes beautiful memories but they also bring longing and pain...perhaps it would be better to forget.
Besos
xoxoxo

dianne said...

Thank you dear tossan for your kind words; a hug for you too.
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Juan querido amigo, yo no quiero que alguien se sienta triste, estoy triste, estoy expresando mis sentimientos en palabras de un poema, tratando de entender por qué me ha abandonado.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Hello, Tiago dear friend, thank you for your kind words, I don't know that my poems impress, I think I am making everyone sad...perhaps it is time to stop.
A big hug and kiss for you too!
xoxoxo ♡

dianne said...

Thanks dear Leovi that is so true but I was the one who loved, he did not love me, all I have are memories.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡

Anonymous said...

This piece is so sad and lonely Mum. You know I love my little Blousey xxxxxxxxxxxxx

dianne said...

Thank you so much for your lovely words my Darling Girl , yes I know you love me, I love you too, what a beautiful daughter you are.
Yes, sad and lonely, and I am even more sad and lonely now because I am a romantic fool and I always get it wrong.
Love from your sad little Blousey.
xoxoxo ♡

Stuti Dhyani said...

Too good! It touched my heart !

dianne said...

Thank you dear Stuti for your thoughtful words, so kind of you.
xoxoxo ♡

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