As time steals away memory
How can I hold you in my heart
The distance between us
Ever widening, forever apart
Take me back to the beginning
To that moment of our start
When we first began our journey
Of warm words and gentle hearts
The path held much promise
Of a destiny unknown
Together we would find it
The happiness our own
Something precious to hold on to
A chance for love to grow
A time to make our memories
In Love's happy glow...
What happened to our story
Where did it go
Why your sudden change of heart
How will I ever know?
Now it all seems so distant
A fading memory from the past
Taken by the shadows of time
As I walk the path alone...
Poem - Dianne Dawes ... ♥
Image - Lonely Path Deviant Art
67 comments:
Hi Dianne, nicely written as always but do you think it may be time to challenge yourself to find a new topic?
Heel mooi gedaan in woord en beeld...
Groetjes Von
Picture and words are lovely, it's a pleasure to see this Dianne.
hugs and kisses, Joop
except for
the photoshop girl
the landscape could be western
alberta -- just a few kms west from here
your writing is nicely progressed, d, but i ditto cosmo, hope to see you expand on your subject matter
× × ×
/t.
Thank you dear J Cosmo for your kinds words and advice.
xoxoxo ♡
Bedankt lieve Von voor uw attente woorden.
warme groet
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Joop for your thoughtful and encouraging words, it is always a pleasure to have you visit.
Hugs and kisses
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear /t. for your kind words, yes this landscape is very pretty, I am not sure where this photo was taken, it could very well be western alberta.
Yes, I should expand my subject matter, I guess these sad poems are wearing thin with many of you.
Actually, I am struggling to write anything, perhaps its time for a break.
xoxoxo ♡
Nice one Dianne!
Stupenda!! felice inizio settimana a te....ciao
So sweet Dianne,
so difficult to walk one,
but you learn from each trip and rises again and walks,
finding new joys.
happy monday and week my Friend
^^
I like this beautiful poem, sweet and nostalgic, the illusion is the last thing you lose. Besos.
Thank you dear Rahul for your kind words.
xoxoxo ♡
Ciao Giancarlo caro amico, la ringrazio per le cortesi parole, uno si vuole una settimana felice anche!
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dearest friend Elia for your thoughtful and encouraging words, yes I must find new joys.
Happy Monday and week my friend. ^^
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear friend Leovi for your thoughftul and lovely comment, you understand, yes, sometimes the last thing we have left to hold on to is illusion.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
Amiga mia.Tu mente y tus sentimentos continuan añorando un pasado,pasado que solo te puede quedar añoraanzas,pero esas añoranzas no dejan tranquilizar a tu espíritu.
Un fuerte abrazo
Juan
Niestety prawdziwe jest powiedzenie, ze miłość nie trwa wiecznie. Zdjęcie do pięknego wiersza jest bardzo ładne. Pozdrawiam.
Unfortunately, it is true to say that love does not last forever. Picture a beautiful poem is very nice. Yours.
I thought she forgot where she parked her car.
Juan querido amigo gracias por tus palabras bien pensadas, es bueno recordar los momentos de felicidad, no estoy añorando el pasado, estoy tratando de entender lo que pasó.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Gigadrogi przyjacielu dziękuję za przemyślane słowa, nie, miłość nie trwa wiecznie dla niektórych, nigdy jego miłość do mnie się zaczęło, ale brakuje mi go nadal, a jego przyjaźń.
ciepłe pozdrowienia
Giga dear friend thank you for your thoughtful words, no, love does not last forever for some, his love for me never began, yet I miss him still and his friendship.
Warm greetings
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Pugsly my sweet for your humorous comment, gosh if she has forgotten where she parked her car I don't think she is going to find it there.
xoxoxo ♡
Hello dear friend, its alwyas a pleasue read your post, as usually all of them are full of emotions.
And yes we live in the ocean full of lost memories, love it =)
Hello Tiago dear friend, thank you for your sweet comment, it is always lovely to have you visit here, you always bring with you some happiness.
Beijos
xoxoxo ♡
Amiga Dianne.Siempre cuándo se rompe
ese lugar tan inestable como és la felicidad,nos convertimos en acusadores,sin pensar que fuimos culpable de esa ruptura.
Si mis fantasias son capaces de alegrarte,éste viejo cascarrabia se siente bién satisfecho.
Un fuerte abrazo
Juan
Really lovely memories, but fades over time there are moments that become crisp and clean heart.
Besos.
Hello dear! A beautiful image and lovely poems, you are so good!
É sempre com agrado que leio os teus poemas e textos que sempre ilustras duma forma elegante. Parabéns
Amiga Dianne.Poeta de las desventuras,el viejo cascarrabia le envia un fuerte abrazo
Juan
hello Dianne ! beautiful poem !"the shadow of time" : love these !hope you enjoy life, we have only one !!!
With a slight difference, I'm sure you're aware these could be my own words. It's as if you read my mind. I feel your pain sweetie. And I hope you don't have to walk the road alone too long. But if you must, then know you're not alone. God walks with you! Hoping your heart heals very soon. Thanks again for all your comforting words on my blog. Love you sweetie! xoxo
Juan querido amigo, acabo de hacer preguntas para comprender por qué, nunca me acusan. sí, es mi culpa que no me amaba ... En sus ojos no era lo que quería.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Art for your kind and thoughtful words.
xoxoxo ♡
Obrigado querida Veiga para o seu tipo e palavras atenciosas.
xoxoxo ♡
Juan querido amigo gracias, no hay desgracias, sólo la vida fuera de balance.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you Marty dear friend for your thoughtful words ... yes, only one life, I am doing my best to get it right.
Bisous
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you Ellie dear friend for your beautiful words, I do hope my words and wishes for you were of some comfort as you have had so much sadness to endure.
I will be walking the road alone forever I feel, there was a small glimmer of hope there for a while, or so I let myself foolishly believe, but that warm glow seems to have gone, just as if the light was taken away and leaving behind a cold silence. Never mind, I have been alone for such a long time now, I am quite used to it.
Love you too sweetie!
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear friend Leovi , yes some memories do fade over time but some will always remain clear in our hearts.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
Amiga Dianne.Amo a mi tierra,por eso en mis fotpografias procuro edealisarla,según mi estado de ánimo.
Un fuerte abrazo
Juan
Very, very lovely, well written and definitely sad. This fellow you are mourning seems to make for a melancholy muse.
The sweet joy of love ... Dianne very evocative poem. Kisses.
Juan querido amigo, su país es muy hermoso, siempre disfruto de las imágenes y fantasías.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Diana for your thoughtful words. Yes, for many of my poems he is my muse. Sometimes we are very fortunate to have someone like him who is exceptional in every way come into our lives and when they leave for whatever reason it is an emotional jolt with far reaching sadness and mourning for their company and friendship.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Leovi for your kind words, the sweet joy of love is but a fading memory for me now. I have to write these poems so that I don't forget what I have lost, even before it had a chance to begin.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
The shadows of the past can shed the light of this. Kisses.
Amiga Dianne.Tus pesares y mis fantasias van unidos hasta la eternidad
Abrazos
Juan
¸.•♫°`♡彡
Você é uma encantadora de palavras... seus poemas são maravilhosos.
Bom fim de semana!
Beijinhos.
Brasil
¸.•♫°`♡彡✿⊱╮
wonderfully romantic and yearning.
felice fine settimana a te...ciao
Thank you dear friend Leovi for your thoughtful words ... yes I look to the shadows of the past for answers.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
Juan mi querido amigo, gracias por tus palabras dulces y amables.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Obrigado querida Inês de suas palavras atenciosas ... um belo fim de semana para você também meu amigo.
beijos
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Paige + Shauna for your lovely comment.
xoxoxo ♡
Grazie caro Giancarlo , un weekend anche a te amico mio.
xoxoxo ♡
Olá Dianne,
adorei o texto e a imagem!
Parabéns e um bom domingo!
Belo poema...Espectacular....
Cumprimentos
Amiga dianne.tus juiciosos comentários a mi fotografia,son pparte de tu cultura.
Un fuerte abrazo
Juan
Yes, sad to walk the walk alone. Kisses.
When love is and remember, and his past looming in our minds, always interesting reflection of what once was so beautiful and the half ended.
have a good week.
a hug.
A beautiful poem dear Dianne!
Hugs to you, Mirthe
Thank you dear Antonio for your lovely words.
A good week for you!
xoxoxo ♡
Caro Fernando obrigado por suas amáveis palavras.
calorosas saudações
xoxoxo ♡
Juan querido amigo gracias por sus amables palabras.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Leovi for your thoughtful words, yes, sad to walk the path alone, yet another day to endure the lonely path.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Ricardo for your lovely words. The reflections are all mine, it was a love half started, it ended before it began but to me the memories are beautiful.
A good week to you too!
A hug.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Mirthe for your kind words.
Hugs to you too my friend.
xoxoxo ♡
The fate venra to us, hopefully acertemos in our decisions.
Besos.
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