I closed my heartNot to feel you
Or the love that welled
Inside just for you
And my eyes shut tight
Not to see you
To quell the desire
That I felt in your sight
Turned my face
So I could not want you
Your written words
Had touched me so
To hide the tears
Of heartache
The one's that so often fell
The many hours in silence
Alone without you
Sadness my only friend
And finally with resignation
I closed my mouth
not to whisper
The waiting words of love
I wished to tell ...
Poem by Dianne Dee ... ♥
Image - Muchacha de Espalda - Salvador Dali - 1925 (1904-1989)
105 comments:
Wow...A lovely poem, with a beautiful picture!
Thank you dear Art for your kind words,happy that you liked my poem ... yes the painting is beautiful.
xoxoxo ♡
Hello Dianne,
The painting by Salvador Dali and his poem is beautiful, sensitive, has everything to do with the image.
I also enjoyed learning to dance in the rain! Great!
a hug
Hi dianne,
What a lovely and heart-touching piece of poetry!
I was lost in your words...its so magical. Loved it!
Great Work!
Can you really close your heart? It's not easy Dianne..in many ways love will still show. Hugs, liza.
This is Just beautiful <3
Beautiful words and choice of illustration, Dianne.
MAGNIFICENT, Dianne !
A delicious full of melancholy poem to accompany a delicious way to such a beautiful image. Unmistakable Dalí. Besos.
Thank you dear Antonio for your very thoughtful comment ... yes I thought the beautiful Dali image was perfect for the sensitivity of my words.
Dancing in the rain is good but a little sunshine would be welcomed for a change.
A hug my friend.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Rosette Princess , that is such a sweet compliment, I am so pleased that you loved my poem.
Hugs
xoxoxo ♡
Yes dear Hliza sometimes one has to close their heart, or try to in order to protect their feelings from a love that cannot be when that love is not returned. It does not stop the love inside, one can only hope that in time the feelings will pass.
Thank you for your kind words.
Hugs, Dianne.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear äмän ♥,for your lovely words, I am happy that you thought my poem was beautiful.
Hugs
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Lee , that is so nice of you to say and yes the Dali painting is beautiful and was just right for my poem.
Hugs
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Harry for your comment, that is quite a compliment ... so happy that you enjoyed my post.
xoxoxo ♡
Yes dear friend Leovi , a poem of feelings straight from my heart and the beautiful Dali painting is just perfect.
Thank you for your kind words.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
There is such heartache in unrequited love but you expressed it so eloquently and beautiful, in a way that truly moved me.
The picture is a lovely work of art and it is a perfect companion to express the story of emotions ~
Great writing and post, Dianne :) ♥
Thank you dear Fiona for your very thoughtful comment of my poem and this post.
Yes, I thought the Dali painting was a perfect choice as there was a sadness about her demeanour that seemed to reflect my feelings.
xoxoxo ♡
Liebe Jasmin , ich danke Ihnen für Ihre klugen und schönen Kommentar. Ich bin so froh, dass Sie dieses Gedicht geliebt. Es ist aus meinem Herzen. Ja, es gibt zwei Seiten zu jeder Geschichte, und obwohl er ein guter und freundlicher Mann ist, ich weiß, dass er keinerlei Gefühle der Zuneigung für mich. Wenn er dieses Gedicht sehen, ich bin sicher, er würde nicht genehmigt wurden, ist er ein Privatmann und würde denken, dass ich mehr Vorsorge mit meinen Worten. Obwohl das sind die Gefühle, die in meinem Herzen sind.
Vielen Dank für die Pflege lieber Freund.
xoxoxo ♡
the words are lovely as is the dali, dianne. i hope you had a lovely spring weekend.
Thank you dearest Foamy , I am pleased that you liked my poem and of course the Dali painting is beautiful.
It has been an awful weekend, heavy rain, high winds and storms ... too miserable to even go for a walk.
I hope tomorrow will be better.
I hope that you are well?
xoxoxo ♡
yes, i'm well. thanks for asking .. :) we have also had heavy rains. must be the seasonal transition.
No 'cold shoulder' there!
another winner, d
And my eyes shut tight
Not to see you
To quell the desire
That I felt in your sight
wow!
<3
I am pleased to hear that you are well Foamy dear. Yes I saw the terrible weather you were experiencing a little while back and since you are now in Fall I thought you might get some rain. We had some beautiful days last week, it was very warm 32ºC on Friday then this big change on Friday night. Today is cool again but not windy or raining ... so far. :)
No dear J Cosmo , I am not giving anyone the 'cold shoulder' and I think the girl in the painting is enjoying the Spanish sunshine.
Thanks for your comment. :)
xoxoxo ♡
Oh, thank you dear /t. , I am so pleased that you liked this poem, especially when you gave it a 'wow'!.
It is sad but somehow I was able to express just how I was feeling.
I hope you liked the painting by Salvador Dali, a style that is very different from his usual works of art in 'surrealism'.
xoxoxo ♡
Ya te dije en una ocacion que nuestras mentalidades no pueden vagar tranquilas,nuestras mentes casi siempre están soñando.
Un fuerte abrazo
Juan
always beautiful your post, great felling :D
Amiga Juan , sí, siempre hay que soñar. La vida sería aburrida si no tuviéramos nuestros sueños.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Tiago for your lovely comment. Always nice to have you to visit me my friend. :)
Beijos
xoxoxo ♡
Only poets can express any stirring of the human soul so beautifully.
Thank you Olga dear, that is such a lovely thing to say...yes I guess I am a poet, one who is very sensitive to my feelings.
xoxoxo ♡
Great poem that you have left us great is the love
A warm greeting from ...
Abstract text and Reflection.
Thank you dear José for your kind words, I am pleased that the love was evident in my poem.
Warm greetings, Dianne.
xoxoxo ♡
Excellent!
Well done, Dianne!
Thank you for your encouraging comment Tame Lion . :)
xoxoxo ♡
Amiga Dienne.
No debemos de olvidar que los primeros dioses que se inventaron
fueron mujeres,despues llegaron las religiones solares y desde entonce dejaron a la mujer en un segundo término.
Un fuerte abrazo
Te sigo daando las gracias por tu seguimiento a mis fantasias
Direct to my heart!
The tears have skipped me...
What a beautiful poem!!!
There will come one day that the women we are understood in the feeling??
I will allow that this time should come, meanwhile I console myself in spite of reading yourself...
A kiss my friend,
(un beso Amiga)
eljardindemiduende
SO beautiful and touching!
love it!
have a great day!
Juan, querido amigo, las mujeres en la antigüedad como deidades eran adorados ... pero pronto borrado por la iglesia. Creo que la mayoría de las mujeres tienen un poco de la Diosas en ellos, es una parte de la belleza natural y la feminidad.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear friend Elia ,for your thoughtful words. I am pleased that my poem has touched you but please don't have tears in your eyes and heart.
One day there will be happiness.
A kiss and hug for you my friend.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Betty for your lovely comment, I am so pleased that you loved my poem. :)
xoxoxo ♡
Amiga Diene.Los campos andaluces,estan preparados para la llegada de las lluvias de otoño y despés comenzar a sembrar.
Un fuerte abrazo
Beautiful and warm poem.
Greetings .-
Amigo Juan , el suelo se ve muy fértil en la fotografía. ¿Qué va a ser sembrada, girasol, uva, el trigo?
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Enrique for your fine praise of my poem.
Saludos
xoxoxo ♡
Tus comentários a mi foto siempre son muy bién recibidos
Abrazos
Gracias amigo Juan , me encanta ver fotos de su campo andaluz.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Amiga Dienne.Nuevamente te doy las gracias por tu constancia y por tus comemntários
Un fuerte abrazo
my dear Dianne,
Beautiful and warm poem.... i`m speechless...
you a great!
My Heart makes: BOOMM! *smile*
greetings & hugs
Synke
A true and sad poem..... Hugs from Luzia.
Gracias querido amigo Juan por sus palabras de bondad y amistad.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Synke for your thoughtful and sweet comment ... gosh your heart makes the BOOMM!
My words did that and is a good thing? I am pleased to know. :)
Greetings and hugs, Dianne.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Luzia for your thoughtful comment, yes a sad poem.
Hugs my dear
xoxoxo ♡
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♥ °
Amiga,
É bonito e vem do fundo da alma.
Bom fim de semana!
Beijinhos.
Brasilº° ✿
✿♥ °
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(░)(♥)(░)
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Caro amigo Inês , obrigado por seu comentário lindo, sim estas palavras vêm de minha alma.
Tenha uma ótima semana
abraços e beijos ✿
xoxoxo ♡
Amiga Dienne.En éste mundo tan materialezado hace falta un poco de fantasia para que nuestras mentes puedan volar.
Un fuerte abrazo
I really love your poems Dianne !
so beautiful and romantic !
wish you a wonderful day
Amigo Juan, que es muy cierto, la imaginación en nuestras vidas, los enriquece. .
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you Marty dear for your thoughtful words, that is such a lovely compliment.
I wish you a wonderful day too.
xoxoxo ♡
Bela pintura...Belo poema...Espectacular....
Cumprimentos
Obrigado pelas suas amáveis palavras querido Fernando , eles são sempre apreciados.
Cumprimentos
xoxoxo ♡
Desde ésta calurosa Andalucia te mando un fuerte abrazo
Juan
dear Dianne,
thanks for this inspirational poem!
aah, bitter but so beautiful one at the same time.
"the waiting words of love i wish to tell..."
you just got me with this one.
betty
Gracias querido amigo Juan , te mando un fuerte abrazo desde Sydney, Australia. :)
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Betty for your lovely comment...no bitterness, just disappointment.
I'm so pleased that you liked that line, sometimes we cannot utter those words, they are better left unsaid.
xoxoxo ♡
Bonsoir Dianne ,
Google's traduction is never quite the right meaning but i can grasp the essential of it .
Your poem is beautiful and touchful .
I hope you're doing well .
I just re-read your comment. Why would you think I was saying that you were giving someone a cold shoulder? I don't understand. It looked as if the lady had an extra-ordinary warm shoulder. Hence my comment. Nothing deeper than that.
Thank you dear Muriel for your lovely comment. Yes the Google traduction is not accurate and I am sure that the true essence of the poem is lost in the translation... hopefully some of it is retained.
I am well now thank you. :)
xoxoxo ♡
Dearest J Cosmo , my comment was said in a light mannered way, nothing deeper than that.
I apologise if I caused any offence or you thought my reply was off-handed...perhaps you will forgive me, I had pneumonia and a temperature of 39.9ºC.
xoxoxo ♡
You are GREAT Dianne,
this is so wonderful.
Greetings, Joop
Amiga mia. ¿ Ya no te gustan mis fotografias ?
Saludos
Thank you dear Joop for your lovely words of praise that is so kind of you. :)
xoxoxo ♡
Querido amigo Juan , por supuesto, me encanta tu pintura, fotografía y naturaleza muerta. ¿Creías que me había olvidado de ti? Lo siento mucho, pido disculpas por no haber visitado en los últimos días, he estado ocupado con asuntos familiares.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Amiga Dienne.Nuevamente te agradezco tu fidelidad en las entradas a mi blog.
Abrazos
Amiga Dienne.No soy pintor,solo solo soy un mal fotógrafo,quizas con demaciadas elucubraciones.
Un fuerte abrazo
Nuevamente te agradezco tus comentários a mis fotos,creo que ésta última nos puede dar que pensar
en nuestro próximo futuro.
Abrazos
La Perfección de las pincelas de Dalí, es el perfecto marco para tu bello poema.
Placer encontrarte.
Abrazos Desde mi puerto.
✿•˚。
。°° 。✿✿
Olá, amiga!
Bom fim de semana!
Beijinhos.
Brasil
✿•˚。
° 。✿ °° 。
●✿
Thanks for your visit
Greetings from Jose Ramon
Abstract text and Reflection.
Amigo Juan , siempre voy a venir y ver tus mensajes, a veces soy un poco tarde en llegar.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Amigo Juan , creo que usted es un magnífico pintor y fotógrafo, usted elige los temas más hermosa. También me gusta mi nuevo nombre, 'Dienne', es muy agradable.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Gracias amigo Juan , me gusta la fotografía, su última foto era muy atento, sí todos nuestros días terminará la larga.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Mediterráneo for your most thoughtful comment and greeting.
It is a pleasure to have you here and thank you for following my blog.
Hugs from me!
xoxoxo ♡
Saudações querida Ines , obrigado, tenha um fim de semana lindo também!
Beijinhos
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear José for the link and the slide show, I will watch this when I have more 'band-width'.
Warm greetings.
xoxoxo ♡
Amiga Dianne.Deseo quew éste fin de semana,en la tranquilidad de tu hojar
te sirva de inspiración para hacer unos de tus bellos poemas.
Abrazos
"Hide the tears" - I know what that feels like.
have a Kiss.
BlueShell
hi dianne,
stopping by to say hi and thanks for following CUT AND DRY!
following your inspiring site right back!:)
hope you have a blissful weekend!
betty
Querido amigo Juan , gracias por sus amables palabras, voy a tener que mirar profundamente algo de inspiración, mi musa parece que me han abandonado esta noche.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Blue Shell for your kind words, yes, sometimes we have to hide the tears and not say what is in our heart.
Beijos
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you Betty dear for your kind message and for following my blog, though I have failed to publish anything inspirational tonight ... I seem to have lost my muse.
Have a lovely weekend too! :)
xoxoxo ♡
Dianne, you have so many comments! Love can be sad, or it can be happy, or even both.
Thank you for stopping by Lamby dear and for your kind words. Yes many comments but half are my responses. Love can be both happy and sad, I would like a little bit of happy for a change. I hope you are well?
xoxoxo ♡
you definitely are a real poet and you have become the master of combining words to image. I love the two together; the searing rawness of the emotion beside this rather weirdly quiet painting. bravo.
Thank you chickory dear friend for this lovely comment. You know I don't think of myself as a poet, I feel the emotions and see the images then compose a poem in words around the two ...I guess that is being poetic.
I am so pleased that you liked the honesty in this poem, it is a true account of my feelings.
I thought the Dali painting was perfect, she sits in silence turning her face, not to see and not to feel.
xoxoxo ♡
Muchas veces las personas nos sentimos abatidos y no sabemos encontrar el camino.
En mi filosofia de pueblerino,qiero pensar que la cultura ayuda bastante.
Un fuerte abrazo
Amiga Dianne.La vieja Europa,tan llena de historias para los amigos del arte és un gran libro por leer.
Un fuerte abrazo
Amigo Juan , gracias por sus palabras bonitas y amables consejos, el amor duele cuando no se devuelve, así que escribir poemas para aliviar mi decepción ... gracias, voy a buscar ese libro.
Un gran abrazo a mi amigo
xoxoxo ♡
Superb!
Thank you dear tattina for your your thoughtful comment.
xoxoxo ♡
Amiga Dianne.Casi todos los pueblos medievales de Andalucia,tienen rincones muy bonitos
Saludo
Juan
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