You who were once here
You who were my friend
You who were so kind
Have gone away
Without a word of farewell, no Goodbye.
Discarded until another day
Am I a memory long forgotten?
With you, you took my hopes and dreams
Did you not think that your words would bind my heart to you?
I remain a prisoner of my feelings for you
I am your puppet, your sad clown
You still control the strings that animate me
Could you not feel this heart that beats beneath my breast?
The beauty from within...
My face with no expression
But for the remnant of a tear...
I am suspended in a state of eternal sadness
Reaching out to you
Always hoping for some sign from you
That I still exist for you
That you are my friend
A kind word, a gesture, anything
To bring some hope to my heart.
If you do not want me
If you do not care anymore
If I am not to be a part of your world
Then tell me, just say the words
Don't keep me in this state of endless silence
My heart is breaking slowly
For want of your attention
Release me from these strings
Release me from these ties that bind my heart to yours
And set me free ...
Prose - Dianne Dawes ... ♥
Image - Victoria Francés Wallpaper - 29
26 comments:
Muito bonito!
¸❤✿•.¸
♥ Bom fim de semana!
♡ Beijinhos.
Brasil
Hallo Dianne
Steeds weer geniet in van jou gedichten en afbeeldingen.
Lieve groetjes en een kus, Joop
Een fijn weekend gewenst !!
very nice!
Wow, now you speak with your heart, maybe your best text!
lovely
Kisses dear friend =)
Beautiful.... Lindo!! Amei!!
beijos do Brasil!
Hello Dianne,
beautiful prose and beautiful painting! They are strong feelings, sad and beautiful words of love!
A hug
Obrigado querida Inêsde suas amáveis palavras, você tem um belo fim de semana também!
Abraços e beijos meu querido amigo!
xoxoxo ♡
Joop lieve vriend, bedankt voor je lieve woorden, je altijd aan te moedigen mij.
Ik wens u een geweldig weekend ook!
warme groeten.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you for your kind words dear İzdihër. :)
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Tiago for your lovely words; I am not sure that this is my best text but definitely one of the saddest and perhaps my heart spoke too much.
Kisses to you too dear friend.
xoxoxo ♡
Obrigado pelas suas amáveis palavras queridos MA FERREIRA , estou tão contente que você amava o meu poema.
beijos da Austrália.
xoxoxo ♡
Hello dear Antonio, thank you for your lovely words and kindness ... yes, strong feelings but too much sadness in this prose.
A hug
xoxoxo ♡
Felice giornata a te...ciao
Dianne magnificent poem. Uncertainty often causes the most pain.
Besos.
Grazie caro Giancarlo , un giorno felice anche a te amico mio. :)
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Leovi for your kind and understanding words...yes uncertainty does cause much pain, it is a long, drawn out form of torment to keep someone in a state of suspense, without any answers or a reason why.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
Hello my sweet Dianne
this is a magnificent poem!!
Your heart is so big, he speak with love and pain...
have a wonderful week,
I send you sunshine!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rc2jsjnt-HY
besos y abrazos
^^
Beautiful poem and picture.
Greetings.
Thank you Elia my sweet friend for your thoughtful words and kindness ... but this poem is too sad.
Thank you also for the link to the song 'You Are My Sunshine', such a sweet and simple song ... a lovely version as sung by Ms.Elizabeth Mitchell and such a romantic gesture by DjRoguefire for his girlfriend.
I used to sing this song when I was a girl, it brings back happy memories of childhood. :)
besos y abrazos
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Pantherka for your thoughtful words.
Warm greetings
xoxoxo ♡
wow dianne
powerful piece
a bit sad, but very powerful(!)
good one
× × ×
/t.
So very, very beautiful and so sad too...
ps: couldn't ya just clip those strings yourself?
I would never go back to a surgeon who managed to bind 2-hearts together, unless my Health Plan forced me to do it.
Thank you dear friend /t. for your thoughtful words, yes, this piece is sad, far too sad.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dearest Foamy for your thoughtful words, I don't know that this poem is beautiful, my words are heartfelt and very sad.
Yes dear friend, I should clip those strings myself, he certainly has not given me any reason to hold onto hope...yet, I feel he is still there for me somehow.
Take care little sweet pea!
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Pugsly my sweet, you always cheer me up, bring me back to reality and make me smile.
It is bad enough being bound to a heart who does not want me, it would be even worse if I was surgically attached.
xoxoxo ♡
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