In the chilling coldness of reality
When all hope of love has gone
How do I go on without you?
Oh how I miss you so ...
As the shadows of night enfold me
Alone with my thoughts once more
The feelings of loss torment me
And arouse all of my fears ...
Why did you have to leave me?
Now all nights will end in tears
No more precious moments
Someone else will share your dreams ...
It is too painful to imagine
I don't know where you are
You have left me here in silence
Alone with just my tears ...
My heart falls by the wayside
Along with my broken dreams
No hope of a tomorrow now
Not with you it would seem ...
In a cold and sobering silence
It takes its bitter blow
I really have nothing left
Even hope has deserted me now ...
Poem/Prose : Dianne D ... ♥
Image: "Alone" by Dianne D - Pencil sketch on linen paper - 2010
When all hope of love has gone
How do I go on without you?
Oh how I miss you so ...
As the shadows of night enfold me
Alone with my thoughts once more
The feelings of loss torment me
And arouse all of my fears ...
Why did you have to leave me?
Now all nights will end in tears
No more precious moments
Someone else will share your dreams ...
It is too painful to imagine
I don't know where you are
You have left me here in silence
Alone with just my tears ...
My heart falls by the wayside
Along with my broken dreams
No hope of a tomorrow now
Not with you it would seem ...
In a cold and sobering silence
It takes its bitter blow
I really have nothing left
Even hope has deserted me now ...
Poem/Prose : Dianne D ... ♥
Image: "Alone" by Dianne D - Pencil sketch on linen paper - 2010
61 comments:
A soulful rendition!
Heartfelt and moving, as always, Dianne.
So moving. Beautiful poem Dianne.
Warm greetings, Mirthe
Beautiful work Dianne.....you are great.
wish you a nice day.
Greetings and a hug, Joop
Hello Dianne,
I loved the design - simple and accurate!
The poetic text speaks of silence, dreams ...
Very good!
I wish you a great Sunday!
I've learned to not share my dreams because "apparently" others find them "disturbing". I once shared then with the author Stephen King, and he was so freaked out, that he couldn't write for hours.
Nice words to sad feelings, when hope is lost we feel invaded by fear. It is essential to be aware of our feelings to overcome them.
Besos.
Thank you dear Rahul for your kind words.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear J Cosmo for your thoughtful words.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Mirthe for your kind words.
Warm greetings
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Joop for your thoughtful words, you are very kind to me.
I wish you a nice day too.
Warm greetings and a hug!
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Antonio , yes it is a very simple drawing and I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem.
I wish you a good week!
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you for stopping by Pugsly my sweet. Gosh your dreams must be frightening if you freaked out Stephen King; you poor little thing, I don't like to think that you have nightmares. I have lovely dreams, I just wish I had a really nice man to share mine with.
xoxoxo ♡
Very sad and very beautiful. I'm sort of hoping you are not feeling all this melancholia yourself.
Thank you dear Leovi for your thoughtful words, yes it is important to externalise our sad feelings, even in a poem, it helps.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dearest Foamy for your thoughtful words. No, I am not feeling sad now, just reflecting on and dealing with some feelings of sadness from recent times. I am perfectly OK now, so please don't worry about me little 'sweet pea'.
xoxoxo ♡
Oh, we were typing about the same time! Have a lovely day, Dianne. Alas, I need to hot the sack. I'm sleepy. :)
Hit the sack ...
Yes Foamy dear, we must have been typing at the same time. Thanks, you have a good night's sleep and have a good week.
xoxoxo ♡
Abandonment, it takes a wound to heal.
Besos.
Amiga Dianne.Tus lamentos,tu desesperación y tus inquietudes se reflejan en tu poesia,tus sentimientos y añoranzas ya forman parte de tu vida
Abrazos.
Me congratula te sigan gustando mis fantasias fotogáficas.
Yes, dear friend Leovi , it will take a long time for the hurt to heal, I am confused,upset,disappointed, but not angry, too sad to be angry.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
Juan mi querido amigo, sí, soy un romántico, me siento profundamente, como pueden ver estoy muy triste. Gracias por sus amables palabras, siempre voy a seguir disfrutando de sus hermosas fantasías fotogáficas.
cálidos abrazos
xoxoxo ♡
Dianne,
Really a beautiful poem. How are you? I have been very busy with work.
Now a days perhaps I'm also going through this phase. I cant stop thinking about the past. and I wonder if soul mates exist why don't they meet and live together and why do they have to live a scattered life!
But I guess there is more to life than living in the past. The fun must be in looking for that!
Take care
Shweta
wow -- heavy
wish you well, dianne
beautiful drawing(!)
× × ×
/t.
Yes, no doubt that after such deep feelings end up coming back hope.
Besos.
I send you a big kiss Dianne, your words are sweet and sad, I like the way you write.
Life is amazing and each day is different.
I think we choose our life every day and there is no time for sadness and regret.
Sorry for my bad english ;)
<3 <3 <3
Hello Shweta dear, is is so nice to see you here. Thank you, I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem.
Yes life would be much happier and simpler if we actually met a soul mate, someone we could identify with on so many levels, someone who cared, who just loved us and cherished us for whom we are...I have not found that yet and I am running out of time and hope.
I know so many people who are happy and complete with each other...why not me?
I have so much to give, yet true love eludes me.
Don't give up hope dear Shweta and don't live in the past, you are young and have so much to look forward to. Yes, the fun is in the looking and you will be pleasantly surprised one day.
Take care
love and hugs
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear /t. for your kind words, yes, too heavy but that's how it is sometimes...I will get over it.
I am pleased that you liked my drawing. :)
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Leovi for your thoughftul words...after such deep feelings end so sadly I dare not hope again.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Muriel for your kind words, you are very sweet, I send you a kiss too.
Yes life is amazing and every day is different, I would once look forward to each day with hope in my heart. This has just been a sad time and there is much regret but I can still see so much beauty in the world and I wish that each day will bring new happiness.
Your english is perfect, much better than my french. :)
Bisous
xoxoxo ♡
Todas mis fantasias se las mando a mi amiga Dianne,para que al verlas se alegre.
Un fuerte abrazo
Dear Dianne,
I can not write poetry, so admire people who are as talented as you!
Reading his poetry feel heart and soul.
Anyone who has experienced the loss and has felt the pain of separation.
It is a feeling that hurts us but it is what makes us stronger.
Linda beautiful poetry!
Congratulations!
Mi amigo Juan, muchas gracias, tus fantasías siempre me hacen feliz, son hermosos.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Naomi for your very thoughtful words and praise of my poetry.
Your words are a comfort and yes the feelings of loss and hurt that I can overcome will make me stronger.
xoxoxo ♡
Amiga Dianne.La primavera siempre es
hermosa,los colores de las flores son tan bonitos que nos hace admirar a la madre tierra.
Un fuerte abrazo
Dear friend,
not know what else to add ... I've left a knot in the stomach, is brilliant yet sad, loneliness is so hard.
The painting is beautiful, the woman's body is simply poetry!
besos
eljardindemiduende ;))
Dianne !! This is so tender, so poetich, you are great! bravo!
Juan mi amigo, muchas gracias, sí, la primavera, los colores son preciosos y la felicidad.
Un cálido abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Elia my dear friend, thank you for your kind and thoughtful words. Please do not be sad for me as I have you and my other friends here and at home who care for me, so I am not completely alone.
I shall be alright and back to my happy self soon, it is just sad when you miss someone who you care for so much. I am pleased that you liked my drawing.
besos
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Laura for your kind words ... I was thinking that your beautiful painting,
'Vulnerable', would have been a perfect companion for my poem.
xoxoxo ♡
Dianne.Tus comentário a mi fotografi
és pura poesia, salió de tu poética mente.
Abrazos
Belo poema...Espectacular....
Cumprimentos
Juan mi amigo, gracias, la fotografía era un poema a la primavera.
Un cálido abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Caro Fernando , obrigado por suas amáveis palavras.
Saudações
xoxoxo ♡
Perhaps I have already mentioned that, when I read your poems, in my mind, I can picture music, and I feel that they can easily be turned into a song.
Hola, bella!
Cuanto duele el amor a veces, y cuántas lágrimas nos arranca.
Me encanto tu poema y tu dibujo a lápiz, precioso!
Besos!
Thank you Olga dear, that is a lovely thing to say, sometimes I think of them as a song but most would be very sad ... a few of my followers have said the same thing.
xoxoxo ♡
Hola, preciosa Mediterráneo,
Gracias por tu comentario preciosa, sí que me muchas lágrimas, pero que pasará con el tiempo. Me alegra que haya disfrutado de mi poema y dibujo a lápiz.
Besos!
xoxoxo ♡
Yes, there are terrible nights, but the morning light brings new hope. Besos.
Amiga Dianne.Cuántas personas habran pasado por esa centenária puerta,
cuámtas história nos podria contar,
pero la madera és inerte,y no tiene sentimientos.
Un fuerte abrazo
Lindo poema apesar de triste.
Lindo o desenho ..
Parabéns pela sua arte!
Beijo do Brasili
Thank you dear Leovi for your lovely comment. As day breaks I wait to see if the morning light brings new hope but, no.
There is one consolation, I still have some very happy memories and nothing can take them away.
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
Juan mi amigo, es una puerta muy vieja, me pregunto si es inerte, me pregunto si tiene recuerdos de la época y las personas que han pasado por ella, todos han dejado su huella.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxoxo ♡
Caro MA FERREIRA, sim, um poema triste, mas muito obrigado por suas amáveis palavras e estou contente que tenha gostado do art.
Saudações da Austrália
xoxoxo ♡
Dianne,
You know as much as i do that sketching is words extending through lines, in the manner you display to to compliment your text, i can see her loosen hair, her body bend with sorrow,she cannot lift her head,the weight of emptiness can be sometimes much heavier than it might seem.
What is interesting is to translate feelings into creativity!
i've been particularly touched by the sensitive contents of this post.
thankyou!
much much love!
col
col dear friend, thank you for your lovely words. Yes my sketch displays the feelings of the poem so well, you can feel the sorrow, the emptiness which is felt so deeply, the resignation of being left to try and go on alone.
I am grateful that you have been touched by the sensitivity of this post.
Much love to you too dear friend!
xoxoxo ♡
*sniff*
Please don't cry dear chickory , I am feeling much happier now.
Love to you sweet girl.
xoxoxo ♡
Nice Image.
From life? A picture? Imagination?
Cheers,
painter
Thank you dear Painter ,my drawing is from a picture and some imagination...nice of you to stop by.
xoxoxo ♡
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