I came to meet you
In the garden of dreams
In the last dying hours
Of the night
When the stars
Are just fading
And the moonlight
Is waning
Standing there lost
Between day and night
But as the sun rose
I could not see you
In the brilliance
Of its golden light
In my thoughts
You're always with me
Forever in my heart
But if I should
Want to touch you
You're out of reach
And out of sight
I wonder
Were you there?
In the shadows
Watching
Away from the light
For I know
I could not see you
I could not feel you
Just the cold
Of the retreating night ...
Poem by Dianne D ... ♥
Image: 'Two Human Beings - The Lonely Ones' - 1894
Edvard Munch 1863 - 1944
60 comments:
I apologise profusely, I had to repost this poem and due to problems with Blogger publish I have now lost all of your lovely comments.
Thank you Irina, tattina, Art, J Cosmo, Joop, Inês, Juan and Pug for all of your comments and encouraging words.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Irina for your thoughtful comment, so nice of you to say.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear tattina for your thoughtful comment...yes, the poem is a little sad.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Art for your lovely comment, you have a nice day too!
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear J Cosmo , yes my friend, wistful and emotive but life goes on.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Joop for your lovely comment.
Warm greetings to you!
xoxoxo ♡
Caro Inês , obrigado por suas palavras mais adoráveis e louvor.
Tenha uma ótima semana
Amor e beijos.
xoxoxo ♡
Amigo Juan , que son muy bienvenidos, la foto era hermosa.
abrazos
xoxoxo ♡
love the munch!!
this flows really well. very lovely. i love reading your poems. you really ought to be famous.
and for all the fellows who lurk around in shadows ... consider yourself finger flicked on the forehead by me. you are annoying.
Thank you for sharing
This Wonderful work with us
Good creations
Thanks Foamy dear friend for your lovely words of praise and encouragement... me famous ... no, I am happy to write my thoughts and poems here.
I love the Munch, I thought it was perfect for this poem.
I don't think there is any fellow in the shadows who cares or is watching over me Foamy or anyone who is remotely interested in me ... but thanks for the offer.
I hope you are all safe from the hurricane?
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Skizo for your thoughtful and lovely comment.
xoxoxo ♡
Hello Dianne,
The poem and the drawing of Munch. Expressionism in twentieth century literature and the XXI century.
While there will be no art civilization.
Congratulations and a hug from all of the studio
beautiful...i loved it! :)
Nice blog!
Me faltam palavras ,pra agradecer sua atenção
comigo.
Ser sua amiga é um presente de Deus na minha vida.
Agradeço a cada uma de suas visitas todas
elas me deixaram muito feliz.
Que seja abençoada por Deus nossa amizade para sempre.
Desejo um feliz final de semana beijos com infinita ternura e paz..
Evanir..
Amada te espero no meu blog quero muito fazer uma surpresa para você.
Hi Dianne~ You write such beautiful peom...a longing for a loved one that through the sunsets,it intensifies until the darkness brings cold and ending to a day loses hope in the heart. It truly displays how nature nurtures us and can help heal deep emotions within....Thanks so much for sharing your amazing talents! Thanks too for visiting my blog and commenting so kindly..warm regards, Linda :-)
Thank you dear Antonio for your thoughtful and interesting comment.
I felt that this image was a perfect expression for my poem.
A hug!
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Rosette Princess , I am pleased that you loved my poem and that you like my blog.
xoxoxo ♡
Obrigado querida Evanir amiga, pela visita, seu comentário pensativo e deixando estas palavras linda para mim.
Amor e paz para você.
xoxoxo ♡
Hi dear Linda - Thank you for your most lovely praise of my poem and its significance. You understand the deeper meaning and intensity of my words, the hope and longing for a loved one and the disappointment as the cold of reality takes hold...also for your visit here.
Warm regards, Dianne.
xoxoxo ♡
lovely words... beautifully crafted lines!
what a beautiful poem once again !
I love your words and your sensitiviy!
have a nice sunday Dianne
bisous
hi Dianne,
Nice poem. How are you? Hope you r good. I have been very very occupied lately. Was not in touch with the world . I feel things are just happening around me and m just a mute spectator. I just jope in few days i'll be able to take charge.
It was good to read ur poem. Thanks!
take care..
love
Shweta
Excellent poem full of tenderness and sensitivity, delicious ... Besos.
Thank you dear Kalyan for visiting my blog and leaving your thoughtful and lovely comment. :)
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Marty for your thoughtful comment and praise of my words.
I did have a lovely Sunday, I went for a drive looking at houses and bought myself a bunch of beautiful yellow gerbera daisies...simple pleasures. :)
I hope you are enjoying your Sunday too!
Bisous
xoxoxo ♡
Jasmin Liebe, danke, so schön die Worte, die Sie schreiben mir, thoughftful, freundlich und großzügig. Meine Reise bisher mit vielen Enttäuschungen gefüllt ist, hoffe ich, den Rest des Weges ist einfacher zu fahren.
Vielen Dank für das Video "Der kleine Prinz", herrliche Musik und Geschichte, obwohl ich nicht verstehen konnte alle der deutschen Sprache, habe ich einen schönen Eindruck von der Geschichte. über Pflege und Betreuung ..
Liebe und den besten Wünschen.
xoxoxo ♡
Hi Shweta dear friend, so lovely to see you back here.
I am good, some days better than others. I hoped you would be happy and settled by now, I am sorry that you are feeling a little overwhelmed by the world, life is like that unfortunately. I hope you will be happier and taking charge soon.
Thank you,I'm pleased you liked my poem.
Take care sweet girl, I wish you all the best.
love
Dianne.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Leovi for your lovely words of praise, I'm pleased that you found my poem 'delicious'. :)
Besos
xoxoxo ♡
Amiga poeta.La poesia és un don para el espíritu y los colores otro don para las vista.
Tu posee un gran amor por la poesia,
y tu espíritu está habierto para recibir lo que yo te mando,colores y amistad.
Un fuerte abrazo
Gracias, querido Juan , por sus amables palabras, la alabanza y la amistad.
Abrazos mi amigo
xoxoxo ♡
Hello lovely poem again, you write so beautiful and sensitive!
I have a feeling of bittersweet sadness, although I'm still trying to find out why.
Thank you dear Art for your thoughtful words, so nice of you to say. :)
xoxoxo ♡
Yes Olga dear, it is bittersweet sadness for it is someone for whom I care,a friend who watches over me from a distance but feels no real attachment to me ...our lives and worlds are so different,an impossible situation.
xoxoxo ♡
My theory is that the screamer from "The Scream" saw this guy making the moves on his gal from the bridge.
Lol, dear Pugsley my sweet, yes he was probably looking at 'shadow man' there behind the girl and was wondering whether his intentions were good or sinister. :)
xoxoxo ♡
awww this touched me soo much.. you have the most beautiful way of using your words xx
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Thank you dear Hayley , such a lovely thing to say.
I do visit your blog often but don't always leave a comment. :)
xoxoxo ♡
what a perfect paring of image to words! In the Munch litho the negative space seems to be primary while the lady in her white is swallowed into distance. Really good. Your imagery is so fine. Lovely, really lovely.
Thank you dearest chickory , I am so pleased that you liked this post. I thought the Munch image was perfect, the distance between her and the shadowy figure, she senses him but is he really there or just in her imagination willing him there.
xoxoxo ♡
Querida aamiga.
poco a poco te estan gustando las fotos de Juan,puede qye yo vive en un munto de colores y fantasias y elo me hace llevar una vida mñas placentera,
A mi los colores animan mi espíritu,como a ti las poesias
Un fuerte abrazo
Tus sentimientos de poeta,te hacen ver lo que tu mente quiere.
La roca y las fantasias de tu amigo
consiguió hacer una foto curiosa.
Un fuerte abrazo
Ohh, what a beautiful poem once again!
Dear Friend, this Garden will be illuminated one day, and the colors will come and you will see that in the shades there is nothing, only love and what your heart wishes...
besos + besos + besos
eljardindemiduende ^^
Gracias amigo Juan , me encantan los colores de sus imágenes y la imaginación que pone en tus fantasías ... sus reflexiones a partir de su corazón y mis poemas de mi corazón.
Un fuerte abrazo a mi amigo.
xoxoxo ♡
Sí amigo Juan , mis sentimientos como un poeta, yo veo lo que yo quiero. Lamentablemente no puedo tener lo que es caro a mi corazón.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Oh dearest friend Elia , thank you, what a beautiful thing to say and to wish for me ... if only my heart was filled with light and colours, perhaps love will find me one day.
amor y besos.
xoxoxo ♡ ^^
Nuevamente le agradezco a mi amiga la constacia de seguir mi blog.
Mi senitud avanza,pero mi mente vuela y vuela.
Un fuerte abrazo
Minha Amada seu blog é um dos homenageados no meu blog.
Eu traduzi o poema para quem ñ entende de tradutor .
Seja bem vinda ao meu blog .
Tem um presente a direita do blog para vc homenageada.
beijos com muito carinho feliz final de semana.
Evanir
Great poem and art.
Gracias a mi amigo Juan por tu comentario amable. Sus ilusiones y las reflexiones son maravillosas.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Caro Evanir, obrigado por honrar o meu poema no seu blogue ..
Abraços e tenham um fim de semana maravilhoso.
beijos
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear C , for your comment, I am happy that you enjoyed my poem and the art.
xoxoxo ♡
Sweetbitter love - it makes me sad this day but it is true...... Thank you Dianne for your always kind comments and yes, you are right - it is a french bulldog. Hugs from Luzia.
Thank you dear Luzia for your kind words and comment, yes the poem is bittersweet and sad, but that is how life is sometimes.
Wishing for things we cannot have.
The French bulldog is so cute. :)
Hugs and kisses
xoxoxo ♡
Dianne,
After reading these lines....i'm sure i will see a ballade of a hundred thousands of stars swaying on a nocturnale veil in accordance to the music of your words!
col
Thank you dear col what a beautiful mind and heart you have, the words of your comment and the image they create are far more beautiful than my poem, what a vision you have created for me...how very sweet you are.
Lots of love and hugs, Dianne
xoxoxo ♡
Amiga Dienne.Espero que tu enfermendad sea cosa leve,mis más sinceros votos para que pronto te encuentres bién
Un fuerte abrazo
Juan
Gracias a mi amigo Juan por su amable deseos para mi salud.
Un fuerte abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
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