Touch on touch
Softness on softness
Your kiss is just
A breath away
The anticipation
A wave of want
And longing
Comes over me
And sweeps me away
Your touch is like a ripple
On the pond of my soul
The stream of life flows
Between us, unstoppable
Warm and loving
Its effect is far reaching
And becomes a part of
My very being . . .
Poem: Dianne D ... ♥
Image: Pink Rose Free Wallpaper
Softness on softness
Your kiss is just
A breath away
The anticipation
A wave of want
And longing
Comes over me
And sweeps me away
Your touch is like a ripple
On the pond of my soul
The stream of life flows
Between us, unstoppable
Warm and loving
Its effect is far reaching
And becomes a part of
My very being . . .
Poem: Dianne D ... ♥
Image: Pink Rose Free Wallpaper
26 comments:
Beautiful.
Truly beautiful.
"The stream of life flows
Between us, unstoppable
Warm and loving"
Well done, dianne!
Lovely poem.
(I'm told that I'm 'touched' but I don't think it is the same thing.)
Thank you dear Alexandre , it has been a while since I could 'feel' the inspiration for a poem.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Foamy , I am so pleased that you enjoyed my words, it has been a while since I have felt any inspiration ... then these thoughts came to me late last night.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear J Cosmo , nice that you enjoyed my poem.
I thought I had lost my inspiration but the words came to me last night.
You are an accomplished poet, I'm sure you would know that sometimes it is difficult to find the words even though we can feel them.
No it is not the same kind of 'touched', there is a big difference. :-)
xoxoxo ♡
It's a lovely feeling..though sometimes I feel anticipation can kill! LOL..happy Sunday Dianne..good to know that you're inspired today..
A lovely poem.
It's quite...well...touching.
Thank you dear HLiza , yes anticipation can be very frustrating sometimes and all too often we are disappointed.
Yes I am inspired today, I certainly hope that it lasts.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Lee
I am pleased that you liked my poem and found it 'touching'. :-)
xoxoxo ♡
a touching
and
a lovely poem, d
well done
× × ×
/t.
Beautiful and profound lyrical, beautiful and torn. Why did express those feelings that we have all felt.
Thank you dear /t.
for your lovely comment, I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem. :-)
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Leovi
for your generous and thoughtful comment, yes, I am sure we have all experienced these feelings at some time in our lives.
Saludos. xoxoxo ♡
your blog is beautiful ! I love this image of a rose and the poem !
Dear Marty , I am so pleased that you enjoyed your visit here and loved the image and my poem.
Merci! xoxoxo ♡
touching yes...and kind of hot too. you should make a little book of these for christmas gifts/
Thank you dear chickory , yes my poem is kind of hot but I tried to write it in a subtle way.
A little book would be a nice idea.
I was thinking about your beautiful 'blue forest' again this morning.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you for your perceptive and rich thoughts, Dianne. They are appreciated and welcomed.
The note of course is whatever you believe it is..or isn't. The story is yours. :)
Cheers to a fellow artist.
-Painter
Thank you dear Painter , yes I was very much in awe of your beautiful painting as you no doubt have realised from my comments ... I look forward to your next work of art.
Yes the note and its content can be my story on which to ponder, there are many possibilities.
Best wishes to a superior artist.
Dianne. xoxoxo ♡
check out "blurb". google it.
Thank you dear K9 ,you are very thoughtful. What a great site, I may yet publish my poems but I shall have to do some more drawings and take some more interesting photographs.
xoxoxo ♡
I sigh..... i felt that deep down inside...simple yet beautiful
I sigh..... i felt that deep down inside...simple yet beautiful
very romantic poem, i liked it!
thankyou Dianne!
hugs
col
Thank you dear col , yes it is a very romantic poem, I'm so pleased that you liked it.
hugs to you too!
Dianne xoxoxo ♡
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