Please don't let me down
I want you around
Dont leave me here alone
in this sadness
You have pushed me away
where I don't want to stay
I will be lost forever
in this darkness
So don't let me down
I need you around
Take me back to that place
where you first found me
I'm walking down your road
with that feeling of coming home
You took me in your arms
and held me
You lifted up my face
and kissed away every trace
Of sadness
And your words of love bound me
You kissed away every tear
and drew me closer, near
Filled my heart with love
you found me
So never push me to the edge
of darkness again
Hold me close
don't let me go again
Just love me...
Poem by Dianne
18 comments:
I enjoyed this poem. You have a knack.
This is WAY better than my last attempt at a love themed poem (which I am about to post on my blog).
XO
a poem
from the heart
but i gotta say, dianne,
if this is directed to the guy
that twice now(?) has broken your heart... well, get another guy!
ܤ ܤ ܤ
/t.
it's like a song ..
and i hate to say this, dianne ..
but beautiful art, poetry, literature, music has come from people who've gone through heartbreak ..
i've gone through heartbreak ..
but nothing beautiful has ever come out of that.
Beautifully written.
I tend to agree with /t., time to look forward rather than back.
Thank you Puggles my sweet, I'm pleased that you liked this poem its a lot brighter than my last two.
I am looking forward to reading your LOVE poem on your blog, sometimes its hard to find the words to express our feelings but I'm sure anything you wrote would be sincere. ♡
Yes dearest /t.
a poem from the heart
I was reminiscing last night and thought about a lot of memories...
about being away and that feeling of belonging which wells up inside as you finally 'come home'; I'm sure you have felt it at some time in your life.
And about something he once wrote to me.
I was putting my words to paper?, I doubt if he would bother reading this...and it would be a waste of time, he wont speak to me...hurt me? yes...time for me to try and forget and move on, he certainly has. ♡
Thank you for kind words. ♡
Thank you my dearest Foamie
yes a sad song, a song of memories from the past as the last threads of hope are broken and float away. ♡
You have been through heartbreak Foamie and just look at your beautiful art, the way you write and something else beautiful has come out of it...You,and you are so very special. ♡
I hope you are feeling better today. ♡
Thank you dear J Cosmo ,
I'm pleased that you liked the poem, I had the intense feelings of emotion but the words didn't come easily, to me they didn't express exactly how I was feeling but sometimes we have to compromise.
Yes, no sense looking back, that door has been closed on me, I'm sure he isn't thinking about or missing me. ♡
Love can be disappointing.
Yes dearest Lil Lambie
it certainly can be disappointing,especially when it is not returned and the person ignores you completely. ♡
For you @-->--
Heartbreak fades and then comes again, then fades more, then again and more fading, then more fading and on and on...
the sweetest hello always comes after the hardest goodbye -Kate Wolf
Corby
A very touching and heart felt poem.
Thank you dearest Corby , that is a lovely quote, you are very thoughtful...
I live in hope of a sweetest hello...lets just hope I don't have to wait too long...♡
Thanks dear Lee
I hope you could feel the emotions I was trying to express, both sadness and that happy feeling of nostalgia of ones first awareness that this man might actually care for me, it was like 'coming home'. ♡
But now sadly it is over because of some petty disagreement, not entirely his fault mine as well...though he is not very forgiving nor understanding.
So the question is do I really want some man who cant think for himself,who is influenced by the opinions of those who seek to hurt me,those who put doubt in his mind and he feels the need to test me... who shows me no loyalty or understanding or cant see me for who I am?
I am thinking long and hard on this question.
Thank you for the details. Seems to me that you already know the answer.
No dear Lee I don't know the answer, that is only one part of the whole of his personality that I don't like and causes me concern...is that enough to make me not like and accept the rest, that's what I have to figure out.
But I don't think I will have to make that decision, I feel he has already chosen to abandon me. ♡
Truly impressive beautiful prayers of love, beautiful sentiments, beautifully expressed. A delight. Besos.
Thank you dear Leovi for your most thoughtful comment and thank goodness I have been able to move on and forget.
Besos xoxoxo ♡
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