Saturday, January 19, 2013

I Surrender


How is it you are gone from me
Alone with my need for you again
You did not say goodbye
You slipped away in the darkness of night
Leaving me here with my sadness
My broken and wasted heart
Alone with my feelings of solitude
And all hope gone from my world
I awoke this morning to emptiness
A space that your presence had filled
I thought that this time you would stay
That you would not be leaving so soon
My love for you was not demanding
It was given with kindness and care
I never asked for it to be returned
I just wanted you to be there
Your presence was a light on my horizon
A glimpse of how love could feel
Only you could bring such happiness
Now with you goes my whole world
I stumble, I fall, I am broken
Until the day you return
I surrender my hopes to the darkness
And return to my empty dreams ...

Prose - Dianne Dawes ... ♡
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51 comments:

  1. GigaJanuary 20, 2013 at 12:16 AM

    Nostalgiczny, ale i piękny wiersz i ozdobiłaś go cudownym zdjęciem. Pozdrawiam.
    Nostalgic, but also a beautiful poem and adorned it wonderful photo. Yours.

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  2. Joop ZandJanuary 20, 2013 at 2:06 AM

    BEAUTIFUL poem Dianne....it's again a great post.

    Wish you a nice sunday.

    warm greetings and a hug, Joop

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  3. Antonio MachadoJanuary 20, 2013 at 2:33 AM

    Hello Dianne,
    is really a beautiful poem!
    Love and their gains and losses always inspire. Joy and sorrow. hope ...
    A big hug

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  4. Fernando Santos (Chana)January 20, 2013 at 3:58 AM

    Belo poema...Espectacular....
    Cumprimentos

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  5. Incanto Images FotografieJanuary 20, 2013 at 6:06 AM

    Sprookjes achtig..heel mooi gedaan.

    Groetjes Von

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  6. LeoviJanuary 20, 2013 at 1:13 PM

    I like this poem, romantic despair ...Besos.

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  7. ArtJanuary 20, 2013 at 11:26 PM

    You are a genius
    Beautiful poem!

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  8. ♥ Łucja-Maria ♥January 20, 2013 at 11:48 PM

    Dianne, a beautiful poem and picture!
    The picture is lovely.
    I send greetings power.
    Lucia

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  9. Magia da InêsJanuary 21, 2013 at 12:48 AM


    ¸.•°♡♡⊱彡

    As voltas que a vida dá!...

    ░Ӈ░ƛ░Ƥ░Ƥ░Ƴ░

    S░U░N░D░A░Y░ !
    ¸.•°♡♡⊱彡

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  10. José RamónJanuary 21, 2013 at 6:47 AM

    Dianne Bellísimo este poema gracias por su visita Saludos

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  11. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 21, 2013 at 2:33 PM

    Very soulful writing, Dianne!

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  12. AnonymousJanuary 21, 2013 at 3:10 PM

    Hello Dear,

    I hope you are doing well. Beautiful lines. I have been pretty occupied with my life. After deleting my blog, I thought of starting a new one, with all good things around me. But then thought, I dont want to write down the feelings, I just want to experience and live, thats it. Or I guess I have grown too occupied or lazy to sit and think.

    I was thinking about you this morning. It was good to read something so beautiful after a long time.

    Hope you remember me :)

    Lots of love

    Take care

    Shweta

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  13. dianneJanuary 21, 2013 at 4:41 PM

    Szanowny Giga, dziękuję za przemyślane słowy, są bardzo mili. Tak, piękny obraz.
    Ciepłe pozdrowienia przyjacielu.
    xoxoxo ♡

    Dear Giga , thank you for your thoughtful words, you are very kind. Yes, a lovely image.
    Warm greetings my friend.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  14. dianneJanuary 21, 2013 at 4:44 PM

    Thank you dear Joop for your kind and thoughtful words.

    A happy week to you too!

    Warm greetibgs and a hug.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  15. dianneJanuary 21, 2013 at 4:47 PM

    Thank you dear Antonio , for your thoughftul words. Yes the joys and sorrows of love and hope.
    Beijos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  16. dianneJanuary 21, 2013 at 4:50 PM

    Caro Fernando , obrigado por suas amáveis ​​palavras.
    Calorosas saudações caro amigo.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  17. dianneJanuary 21, 2013 at 4:53 PM

    Bedankt lieve Von, voor uw vriendelijke woorden, het beeld ziet eruit als een sprookje, maar ik dacht dat sprookjes moesten een happy end hebben.
    Hartelijke groeten mijn vriend.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  18. dianneJanuary 21, 2013 at 4:55 PM

    Thank you dear friend Leovi for your kind words...'romantic despair', the story of my life.
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  19. dianneJanuary 21, 2013 at 4:57 PM

    Thank you dear Art for your wonderful comment, you are far too generous with your compliment of my sad poem.
    Warm greetings.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  20. dianneJanuary 21, 2013 at 4:59 PM

    Thank you dear Lucia for your thoughtful words, I need strength
    at the moment.
    Warm greetings, Dianne.

    xoxoxo ♡

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  21. dianneJanuary 21, 2013 at 5:02 PM

    Caro Inês , obrigado por suas amáveis ​​palavras, sim, a vida muda o tempo todo.
    Tenho um amigo querido grande semana.
    beijos

    xoxoxo ♡

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  22. dianneJanuary 21, 2013 at 5:05 PM

    Gracias, querido José por sus amables palabras.
    Un fuerte abrazo.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  23. dianneJanuary 21, 2013 at 5:10 PM

    Thank you dear Rahul for your kind words.
    Warm greetings.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  24. dianneJanuary 21, 2013 at 5:32 PM

    Shweta sweet girl of course I remember you, I often think about you, I was wondering how you were, I see you have closed 'Random Thoughts'.

    It is good that you are living your life, you are young and have so much yet to experience. I hope you are happy and settled in your life.
    Better than sitting here like me at the computer.

    I spend a lot of my time caring for my son, so I don't have much of a social life, virtually none.

    My life goes around in circles, my poems are my outlet for my inspiration and my feelings.
    I am pleased that you like this prose, it was written for my beautiful friend and muse, he comes and goes from my life...it is always sad when he leaves.

    Take care sweet girl and lots of love to you too.
    Dianne

    xoxoxo ♡

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  25. EliaJanuary 21, 2013 at 10:14 PM

    Hello Dianne
    sorry I was busy..
    so beautiful poem and picture!
    Another poem with love!


    Wish you a nice week,

    warm greetings and a hug for you,
    ^^

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  26. dianneJanuary 22, 2013 at 12:12 AM

    Thank you dearest Elia for your thoughtful words, yes, another poem with love and sadness.

    I wish you a good week too!

    Love and hugs for you my friend. ^^

    besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  27. JUAN FUENTESJanuary 22, 2013 at 2:45 AM

    Amiga Dianne.Tus poéticos comentarios a mi fotografia me muestran la bondad y las inquietudes de tu personalidad.
    Un fuerte abrazo

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  28. LeoviJanuary 22, 2013 at 11:24 AM

    Yes, the vacuum caused by the abandonment of love is painful.
    Besos.

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  29. JUAN FUENTESJanuary 22, 2013 at 6:40 PM

    Amiga Dianne.La fotografia no és ninguna pintura,es la realidad.
    En Andalucia al ser tierra de invaciones y conquistas, tenemos una gran cantidad de castillos,algunos muy bién conservados

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  30. Rosa Branca January 22, 2013 at 11:35 PM

    BEAUTIFUL POEM, CONGRATULATIONS AND HAVE A NICE DAY.

    KISSES

    PATY ALVES
    www.agape-amorverdaeiro.blogspot.com
    www.patyiva.blogspot.com
    www.tentardecoracao.blogspot.com

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  31. darkfoamJanuary 23, 2013 at 9:47 AM

    You are so very good at waiting these sad poems, Dianne.
    They are beautiful.

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  32. AnalíaJanuary 23, 2013 at 1:30 PM

    Never surrender Dianne. Be strong. A lot of kisses for you!

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  33. dianneJanuary 23, 2013 at 4:54 PM

    Juan querido amigo, gracias por tus palabras thoughftul.
    Un fuerte abrazo
    xoxoxo ♡

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  34. dianneJanuary 23, 2013 at 5:01 PM

    Evanir caro amigo, obrigado por suas preciosas palavras. Sim, se alguém é um amigo de verdade, então eles vão ficar com você sempre e não tomar a sua amizade de distância. Infelizmente algumas pessoas não são verdadeiros amigos. Obrigado por sua amizade e suas palavras de amor e conforto, eles me fazem sentir mais valorizada.
    Deus te abençoe muito e fazer todos os seus dias cheios de amor e luz.
    Muito amor, Dianne.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  35. dianneJanuary 23, 2013 at 5:03 PM

    Thank you for your kind words dear Leovi , yes, what you say is so true, that void is such a lonely place.
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  36. dianneJanuary 23, 2013 at 5:12 PM

    Juan querido amigo, es un castillo muy hermoso. España es un país de gran belleza, con paisajes increíbles y muchos castillos e iglesias, he visto muchas fotografías, que he admirado.
    Un fuerte abrazo
    xoxoxo ♡

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  37. dianneJanuary 23, 2013 at 5:14 PM

    Thank you dear Rosa for your kind words and congratulations.
    Have a lovely day too!
    kisses

    xoxoxo ♡

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  38. dianneJanuary 23, 2013 at 5:29 PM

    Thank you dearest Foamy , I write these poems from personal experience, they come from the heart, you could say they are a form of catharsis.
    I have a great depth of feeling for loving someone but when you feel so deeply you can be hurt so much when they don't feel the same. You cannot stop loving someone just because they don't return that love...I wish I could.
    So life goes on alone, one day at a time.
    Take care lil sweet pea.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  39. dianneJanuary 23, 2013 at 5:34 PM

    Thank you dear Analia for your kind words, sometimes surrendering your hopes and feelings is the only way to survive the reality and the hurt.

    xoxoxo ♡

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  40. LeoviJanuary 23, 2013 at 10:45 PM

    Yes, even while there is hope there is love. Kisses.

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  41. dianneJanuary 23, 2013 at 11:39 PM

    Thank you dear Leovi yes, but the love is not returned.
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  42. JUAN FUENTESJanuary 24, 2013 at 3:58 AM

    En Europra priliferan los castillos,muchos de ellos muy bién conservados
    Un Fuerte abrazo

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  43. UnknownJanuary 24, 2013 at 5:45 AM

    A particularly artistic and very poetic, the poem is beautiful.
    Greetings. -

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  44. JUAN FUENTESJanuary 24, 2013 at 4:36 PM

    Observo que tu esíritu de poeta se despertó al ver la marina del viejo fotógrafo.
    Un fuerte abrazo

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  45. dianneJanuary 24, 2013 at 4:59 PM

    Eso es bueno querido Juan , tantos hermosos castillos, historia, tanto antigua preservada para nosotros para admirar.
    Abrazos mi amigo
    xoxoxo ♡

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  46. dianneJanuary 24, 2013 at 10:26 PM

    Thank you dear Enrique for your kind words...artistic no, straight from my heart.
    Greetings my friend
    xoxoxo ♡

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  47. dianneJanuary 24, 2013 at 10:30 PM

    Tú eres mi favorito fotógrafo Marina querido Juan , me encanta el mar, la costa y las playas.
    Un fuerte abrazo
    xoxoxo ♡

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  48. Betty ManousosJanuary 30, 2013 at 11:59 PM

    sad but so very beautiful!

    ah, true love can break your heart sometimes..if not always!

    big hugs.

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  49. dianneJanuary 31, 2013 at 10:09 AM

    Thank you dear Betty for your kind words, I think true love is a rare thing, only the very fortunate ever experience it.
    Big hugs
    xoxoxo ♡

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  50. Craftsman of lightFebruary 26, 2013 at 11:19 PM


    My dear Dianne,
    i like this poem in particulier,...its contents are emotional in a way i like it.

    i realise that i have'nt been on your blog since quite a while....and i read your poems and posting with great emotion.

    thankyou Dianne.
    hugs col

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  51. dianneFebruary 27, 2013 at 11:15 AM

    Thank you dear col , I am pleased that you like this poem.

    You don't have to visit my blog all of the time, I sense that you are there sometimes ... away somewhere experiencing the world and writing your amazing prose.

    love and hugs
    Dianne
    xoxoxo ♡

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