Saturday, January 18, 2014

A Dream Too Far Away ...



Another day passes
As I wait for you here
Hoping for your words
Wishing you were near
I feel your presence
But I cannot be sure
Perhaps I am dreaming
Hoping for more
Time stands still
As I wait for you here
Lost amongst the shadows
Of moments we once shared
Looking for your light
To find my way once more
And at the edge of memories
Where hope fades away
My words are not enough
To keep you close by
Further from me now
Than you were before
You feel so distant
Like you’re drawing away
And the beauty of your words
That I hold so dearly
Always seem to be
A dream too far away…

Poem - Dianne Dawes ... ♥
Free image from Internet

48 comments:

  1. Very nice love poem, love it, but if you want does not come to meet us, to lose hope before we go looking! But the worst is not knowing where to look! Kisses!

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  2. Ohh nyce and romantic poem !!!!

    Your heart speak through this poem, so lovely,
    I hope you find this dream in your life, my Frfiend

    kiesses and hugs,
    its cold here
    take care

    and smile

    ^^

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  3. Piękny wiersz, ale trochę smutny. Róża jego treść upiększa. Pozdrawiam.
    Beautiful poem, but a little sad. Rose beautifies its content. Yours.

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  4. Thank you dear Leovi for your thoughtful words.
    It is sad to lose hope but sadder still when you reach out to a friend and they have nothing at all to say.

    Besos

    xoxoxo ♡

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  5. Oh thank you sweet Elia for your lovely words, perhaps one day I shall find my way to the happiness I need.

    Keep warm dear friend ... it is so hot here.
    Good luck and take care, my thoughts are with you!
    :)
    besos

    xoxoxo ♡

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  6. Giga drogi przyjacielu, dziękuję za miłe słowa, tak wiersz jest trochę smutny.Obraz róż z słońce za nimi jest piękna ... jest symboliczne.
    ciepłe pozdrowienia
    xoxoxo ♡

    Giga dear friend, thank you for your kind words, yes the poem is a little sad. The image of the roses with the sun setting behind them is beautiful...it is symbolic.
    Warm greetings
    xoxoxo ♡

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  7. A very wistful piece, Dianne. An air of sad resignation. :-(

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  8. Tu tienes la suerte que a traves de la poesia puedes desnudar tu alma, y ello te hace siempre un gran bién
    Saludos

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  9. beautiful !
    it must be so hard sometimes !
    perhaps dreams help us
    lovely sunday dianne

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  10. Thank you dear Cosmo for your kind and thoughtful words.

    xoxoxo ♡

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  11. Gracias querido amigo Juan por sus amables palabras, sería una maravilla si mi poesía podía resolver todos mis problemas, pero lamentablemente no es así.

    Un fuerte abrazo

    xoxoxo ♡

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  12. Thank you dear Yannis for your kind and beautiful comment, it touched my heart.
    Hugs dear friend!

    xoxoxo ♡

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  13. Thank you dear Marty for your thoughtful words, yes it is difficult, I hope for a friendship which isn't there anymore.

    Have a lovely Sunday!
    bisous

    xoxoxo ♡

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  14. Sometimes dreams come and perch on our shoulders!
    Besos!

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  15. Thank you dear Leovi , yes, I guess for some their dreams do come true and that is very nice.
    Besos

    xoxoxo ♡

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  16. Tu poético comentário a mi fotografia a echo resalrar mi ego

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  17. Such a lonely but romantic poem.
    www.thoughtsofpasp.com

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  18. Los poetas siempre siente un poco de amor por los otoños

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  19. Juan querido amigo, su fotografía es siempre hermosa y merece ser alabado.
    abrazos cálidos

    xoxoxo ♡

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  20. Gracias, querido José por sus amables palabras.
    Abrazos

    xoxoxo ♡

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  21. Thank you dear PAPS for your kind words, yes, it is both sad and romantic.
    Hugs
    xoxoxo ♡

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  22. Gracias, querido Juan . El otoño es una estación preciosa.
    abrazos cálidos

    xoxoxo ♡

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  23. I like to read your poems. Have a nice day :)

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  24. Las flores amaarillas florecen en invierno,en éata parte de Andaliucia
    Los campos paracen pintados de ese color

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  25. Thank you dear Rahul for your kindness.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  26. Thank you for your kind words dear Joanna and I wish a nice day too!
    hugs
    xoxoxo ♡

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  27. Las flores amarillas hijo tan querido Hermosos Juan y sin Traen Calor de colores al paisaje de invierno de Andalucía.
    Abrazos mi amigo
    xoxoxo ♡

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  28. hi, its very nice start the day with this poeme, is very cute. Thanks for it. Kiss, bye

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  29. A nice poem that I enjoyed reading. Well done.

    Thank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.

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  30. Thank you dear Awesome Needles for your very sweet words.
    Kisses
    xoxoxo ♡

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  31. Thank you dear Andrew for your kind words.
    hugs
    xoxoxo ♡

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  32. Hello Dianne,
    beautiful verses. Your romanticism is inspiring!
    a hug

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  33. Thank you dear Patrycja for your visit and your kind words. :)
    hugs
    xoxoxo ♡

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  34. Thank you dear Antonio for your kind and thoughtful words.
    hugs

    xoxoxo ♡

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  35. Celebro te gusten los paisajes marinos de Andalucia

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  36. ¸.•°♡♡♫° ·.

    Imagem maravilhosa!
    Poesia tão doce quanto a imagem.
    Boa semana!
    °º✿♫ Beijinhos

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  37. Oops, how did I miss posting?
    It's wistful, Dianne, and sad but really quite lovely too.

    x x x

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  38. Obrigado pela visita....lindo blog...bjus

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  39. Obrigado querido Fernando pelas suas amáveis ​​palavras.
    calorosas saudações

    xoxoxo ♡

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  40. Gracias, querido Juan , sus marinas y paisajes son hermosos.
    abrazos

    xoxoxo ♡

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  41. Obrigado querida Inês por suas palavras doces.
    Fim de semana feliz!

    beijos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  42. Thank you dearest Foamy for your lovely words...one could easily miss my post, all of my poems sound the same.
    Hugs lil Sweet Pea!

    xoxoxo ♡

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  43. Obrigado querida Elisabete pelas suas amáveis ​​palavras, seus poemas eram tão adorável.
    beijos

    xoxoxo ♡

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  44. Lol.. That is not true! It's called having a style of writing .. :-D

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  45. Lol dear Foamy , it is funny because I keep trying but always seem to fail.
    love and hugs
    xoxoxo ♡

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