Thinking of the past
Memories pass over me
Like gossamer thoughts
They fade all too soon
I try to remember
When happiness found me
And try to forget
When you left all too soon
Once more I am alone
Lost in sadness
Again in the shadows
Trying to find my way
Deep and deeper I fall
Into the abyss of silence
I am almost at the end
Oblivion calls …
Prose - Dianne Dawes
Music - Thinking of the Past - mdeman
look around you to see the sunshine, smiles and life !
ReplyDeletesad and beautiful words!
leave the shadow to find the light !
bisous dianne
LOVELY MUSIC Dianne..... thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteWarm greetings, Joop
Thank you dear Marty for your wise and thoughtful words.
ReplyDeleteThis piece of prose came from some sad thoughts. It is foolish of me to expect anything, people we care for often disappoint and let us down.
It is of no consequence, life still goes on, the sun is shining this morning and my first freesia flower has blossomed.
bisous
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Joop , yes the music is lovely...as for the prose, well it caught me at a low moment, but life goes on with the constancy of sunshine and flowers.
ReplyDeleteWarm greetings my friend.
xoxoxo ♡
A good poem, in him there is silence, it is the way to go!
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Great! Beautiful:)
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Leovi for your kind words, yes, silence is a familiar companion.
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xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Joanna for your kind words.
ReplyDeleteWarm greetings
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you for your comment on my blog :)
ReplyDeleteAw. Made me sad :(
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Joanna , you are most welcome.
ReplyDeleteWarm greetings
xoxoxo ♡
Aw,sweet Diane , I am sorry that my prose made you sad.
ReplyDeleteIt is sad, it was written when I had feelings of hopelessness,some parts of my life are far from how I would like them to be. I should not let myself feel that way and should have just deleted the prose.
Thank you for stopping by!
xoxoxo ♡
Too pretty = to beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you dear tossan , you are far too kind to me.
ReplyDeleteBeijos
xoxoxo ♡
Ola querida amiga,embora um pouco triste,tua poesia e musica escolhida são muito bonitas.Acredito que sempre temos que lembrar nossos bons momentos do passado com uma certa alegria,pois fomos felizes então.Devemos nos lembrar que a felicidade mora no nosso coração e cabe a nós,dar -lhe asas para deixar que entrelace nosso interior a cada dia de nossas vidas.Meu grande abraço.SU
ReplyDeleteYes, nice piano piece, wonderful romance!
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Bela música e poema...Espectacular....
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Tus lamentos que te salen de lo más profundo de tus sentimientos,son como garras que ahonda cada dia más.
ReplyDeleteTu desesperación estan anulando todos tus sentidos
Abrazos
Olá querida amiga Suzane , obrigado pelas suas palavras de conforto. Vou olhar profundamente em meu coração e encontrar a felicidade que está lá e encontrar conforto nas boas lembranças do passado. Enquanto eu tiver vida eu ainda tenho esperança.
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Thank you dear Leovi for your kind words, yes, it is a beautiful piece of music, sad but beautiful.
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Obrigado querido Fernando por suas palavras atenciosas.
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Thank you dear Patrycja for your kind words.
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Gracias, querido Juan por sus palabras thoughftul. Estoy triste y mis emociones son prima de otra decepción que tengo que soportar. Mis otros sentidos están muy vivos, deseo que no podía sentir nada, voy a tratar de no escribir de tristeza otra vez.
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Eu só tenho a dizer nessa
ReplyDeletesimples mensagem , que estou deixando com muito Amor
para você.
Tu fazes parte das amizades doces da minha vida ,
que se importa comigo .
Nem sempre consigo agradar ou mesmo
estar em visita constante.
Eu só desejo ser uma amiga importante na sua vida
jamais sonhei e em nem desejei perder amizade
e carinho , que sempre recebi de quase todos
aqueles , que de alguma forma eu
magoei deixo meu pedido de perdão.
A vida é curta nossos momentos breves
eu ainda acredito na força do amor.
Beijos ternos e carinhosos de alma e coração..
Evanir..
Maybe it's a sad poem, but nevertheless it is beautiful,
ReplyDeletebeautiful music that accompanies these words,
memories of the past that will not return ... but remember, my Friend
there will always be good days in the future, even better, but you do not see it right now,
I'm sure that you life holds great joys!
a big kiss to you
^^
Obrigado querida Evanir por suas palavras atenciosas, é tão bom saber que você é meu amigo. Agradeço-lhe por suas visitas aqui para colocar meus pensamentos em perspectiva.
ReplyDeleteSim, o poder do amor é muito forte e assim também a profundidade dos meus sentimentos, infelizmente, nenhuma quantidade de amor dada pode fazer alguém voltar esses sentimentos e me ame. Tudo o que resta é lembranças. Eu me sinto como se eu estivesse à deriva em um mar de solidão e não há margem para cumprimentar e me resgatar.
Tome cuidado querido amigo e Deus o abençoe por sua bondade.
Amor e abraços, Dianne
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dearest Elia for your kind and thoughtful words.
ReplyDeleteYes, memories from the past that will never return and I must accept this and try to stop this sadness and longing.
I hope the future holds good days, though I cannot see that right now from where I am.
I do have some joy in my life, friends like you and family and I am truly grateful for those blessings.
A big kiss for you my dear
Comptesse. ^^
xoxoxo ♡
This beautiful poem describes my story. I am so happy I am no longer lost in the shadows. Pero despues de leer uno de tus comentarios, veo que tu si sabes lo que es perder. La perdida de relacion. No te preocupes amiga, que esto tambien pasara. Aqui por ti... abrazos!
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ReplyDeleteI became a reader ...
A good text ...
Your prose is not of woman
which chronicles their
adventures of nights gone
only concern itself ode!
Words fly ... Without hesitation ...
But even a strong narrative,
with all this care ...
Filled my soul,
just smiling and thought:
Liked, as you write
a lovely woman!
(text by tossan)
Gracias querida Ellie , por su amable y las palabras bien pensadas. Estoy tan feliz por ti, ya que ahora está fuera de la oscuridad hacia la luz. Estoy perdido en las sombras de tristeza y rechazo pero con el tiempo esto va a pasar, espero que va a pasar.
ReplyDeleteMuchos abrazos para ti también.
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear tossan for your beautiful, poetic words and for your kindness.
ReplyDeleteNo, I do not speak of my adventures or chronicle my life, the words of my prose speak truthfully of the sadness and loss which has taken so much from me.
beijos
xoxoxo ♡
Los colores de esa fotografia,quizas sirvan para levantar un poco tus tristezas
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for all your lovely comments. It's so nice to come back to Bloggyland to friends!! xo
ReplyDeleteTus fotos son siempre hermosos querido Juan , siempre me gusta los colores de su paisaje, las flores y el mar y las playas.
ReplyDeleteUn cálido abrazo
xoxoxo ♡
Thank you dear Diane it is so lovely to have you return and I am enjoying your writing and your amazing prose and poems.
ReplyDeleteI hope that more friends will find you soon and visit.
Your friend, Dianne
hugs
xoxoxo ♡
Las imaginaciones y las fantasias del viejo fotografo,te las envios para intentar mitigar un poco tu decaimiento
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Ce texte est magnifique Dianne.
ReplyDeleteMany Thanks.
I am deeply moved by your poem.
♥
Gracias querido Juan por sus amables palabras, sus fotografías y fantasías son siempre agradables diversiones de la tristeza de mis pensamientos.
ReplyDeleteUn fuerte abrazo
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Many thanks dear Muriel for the kindness of your words, you are very sweet.
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Beautiful post, dianne! I like the music too! :)
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Thank you dear Marisa for your thoughtful words.
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