Wednesday, August 28, 2013

Silence Again ...


Now the silence falls again
Like a veil of coldness
It closes in
Thoughts of unknowing
Hurt me again
I wonder this time
If it is the end ...
I went to your place
And you were gone
Not a word, a memory
Left to resound
Emptiness is all I found ...
So here I am alone again
What am I to do 
How do I go on?
Lost in sadness
Will it ever end?
Left to wonder
What did I say?
To make you leave
For you to go away ...
What did I ask of you?
That was too much
For you to say
All I needed
Some kind words
From a friend ...
Not a word
Not an answer
Silence again.
Now you return
To your solitude
Once again
Seeking silence
Your closest friend …

Poem  - Dianne Dawes ... ♥
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34 comments:

  1. Hi Sweetie, sometimes we find the hand of God in solitude. We love hard and when they're not there, we wonder if life will ever be the same without them. No it won't. But we move forward having no other choice. Be encouraged in knowing that no one can be as faithful to us than the one who made us. In your alone time, take comfort in God.
    Hugs! xox

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  2. sometimes, the silence is better than words ! if you feel alone, think how beautiful is this world and how many lights you can find !
    I send you a lot of bisous Dianne

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  3. Nuevamente la melancolia y la tristeza.son como un desgarro que
    no quiere ver tu presente.
    Un fuerte abrazo

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  4. Bela poesia...Espectacular....
    Cumprimentos

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  5. A deep poetry, there are moment in life that silence and solitude are what help heal unpleasant situations in life. It's all about time.

    I send you lots of good energy.
    Hugs,
    Marisa.

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  6. Thank you dearest Ellie for your thoughtfulness and your words of comfort.
    I have written this poem in the hope that he might see it but I am not too sure that he will read my words.
    When he returned in mid-July, he did ask me to write for him, he did stay for a little while.
    Now he has gone again and I don't understand why. I did not ask too much of him, I just hoped for some friendly words, surely that is not too much to ask between friends. Perhaps I said too much and made too much noise in his world of solitude but it should not have been too much if he was truly my friend.
    Love and hugs
    xoxoxo ♡

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  7. Thank you dear Marty for your thoughtful words.
    Yes I guess silence is better than a 'Goodbye', that is so final ... but I am still left to wonder if he is gone forever this time.
    Thankfully I can still see the beauty and the light in the world and I can still feel happiness when I look around me.
    I send you lots of bisous too!
    xoxoxo ♡

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  8. Gracias querido Juan por sus palabras bien pensadas, espero que este será mi último poema de melancolía, de las palabras perdidas, porque estoy cansado de tristeza.
    Un fuerte abrazo
    xoxoxo ♡

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  9. Obrigado querido Fernando pelas suas amáveis ​​palavras.
    Calorosas saudações e um abraço
    xoxoxo ♡

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  10. Thank you dear Marisa for your thoughtful words.
    Yes, healing takes time.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  11. A sad note.
    www.thoughtsofpaps.com

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  12. Thank you dear PAPS for your kind comment. Yes, much sadness, disappointment and confusion in my words.
    hugs
    xoxoxo ♡

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  13. Mi mayor deseo és que éste sol de Andalucia llegue a tu persona y con esa claridad te abandonen tus tristezas
    Juan

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  14. Gracias, querido Juan , una cosa tan dulce que decirme, usted es un hombre amable y comprensivo. Sí me gustaría que mi dolor me dejaba, yo estoy tratando de olvidar y dejar atrás el pasado.
    Abrazos cálidos mi amigo

    xoxoxo ♡

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  15. It's a sad, but a beautiful poem. Exquisite!!
    Besos.

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  16. W wierszu jest smutek i brak nadziei, którą jednak zawsze trzeba mieć. Pozdrawiam.
    The line is the sadness and hopelessness, which, however, always have to have. Yours.

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  17. Thank you dear Leovi , for your kind words.
    Yes, a sad poem, a last attempt to reach out to someone whom I care for but I can see my words are wasted, they will be left unread by him and ignored.
    Time to stop I think.
    Besos

    xoxoxo ♡

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  18. Thank you dear Giga for your thoughtful words. Yes lines of sadness and hopelessness, that is how I am left to feel. Of no worth but that is not so, anyone who truly knows me and cares knows my true worth as a friend.
    Warm greetings dear friend.

    Dziękuję kochanie Giga dla myślących słów. Tak linie smutku i beznadziei, że jest to, jak jestem w lewo czuć. Z nie warto, ale to nie jest tak, kto naprawdę zna mnie i dba zna moją prawdziwą wartość jako przyjaciela.
    Ciepłe pozdrowienia drogi przyjacielu.

    xoxoxo ♡

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  19. Yes, full of empty loneliness is really devastating!
    Besos.

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  20. Thank you again dear Leovi , for your thoughtful words, I will overcome this sadness.
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  21. A very sad poem dear Dianne......friendly words are indeed not too much to ask between friends.

    Wish you all the best.

    Warm greetings from a friend, Joop

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  22. Thank you dear Joop for your kind and understanding words.

    Friendship is precious, it requires constancy from two people, it should not be taken for granted and like all special things in life it needs to be nurtured not neglected.
    If someone is a true friend then a few words is not too much to ask, in fact I should not need to ask.

    Warm greetings to you dear friend, Dianne.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  23. I feel it with you. Wish you all the best.
    With warm greetings, Mirthe

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  24. Casi todos mis bodegones personales,son vivencias de mi entorno,tu lo intenta hacer a traves de tu poesia,y yo lo intento con mis imágenes

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  25. Madonna mia! What a beautiful poem!
    O. kiss

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  26. Thank you dear Mirthe for your thoughtful words, you are very kind.
    Warm greetings to you, Dianne.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  27. Gracias querido Juan por sus palabras bien pensadas, me doy cuenta que no soy la única persona que está triste y tiene remordimientos. Sus imágenes son siempre sensible y hermosa, también lo son sus palabras.
    Abrazos mi amigo
    xoxoxo ♡

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  28. Thank you dear tossan for your sweet words, you are very kind.
    beijos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  29. Yep, well then .. I hardly know what to say, dianne. I'm not surprised. Your friend makes for an interesting muse though. Your poems are beautiful.

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  30. Thank you dearest Foamy for your thoughtful words and for visiting.
    I know these poems of heartache are becoming very tedious, I think this will be my last.
    He does make for an interesting muse, he gives me plenty of sorrow to write about.
    I am not surprised either,it would not be the first time, though I did not think he would leave so soon.
    I think I expected too much and should have realised that my feelings are not very important to him.
    I must be more careful with my heart, I only have one and it is not doing so well at present.

    Take care lil sweet pea and I hope your ligament will be completely healed soon.

    xoxoxo ♡

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  31. Thank you for your kind words dear Patrycja .
    Warm greetings to you and Daniel!
    xoxoxo ♡

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  32. Yes, under our skin lies the memory of our caresses received!
    Besos.

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  33. So true dear Leovi , our memories live on.
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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