Friday, December 7, 2012

On The Outside Looking In

It's a cold and lonely place
on the outside looking in
There's a chill in my heart
as I look for you there
Trying to find a reflection
of how we used to be
I'm excluded and rejected
such a desolate place to be
How sad that you forget
all that we once shared
How long I would wait
in silence for you here
I had no expectations
it was just that I cared
I was always about 'feelings'
always about 'heart'
We had a long history
I was with you from the start
I gave you consolation
the warmth of my heart
Always there to listen
when you needed a friend
But you wrote the last words
on the page that said 'Goodbye'
Closed the book on me
and sent me away.
And showed me little understanding
in the end ...

Poem - Dianne Dawes ... ♥
Image  - Still from 'The Double Life of Véronique'
             Courtesy of Google Images

47 comments:

  1. Thank you dear Rahul , yes it does hurt, it always sad when a friendship ends.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  2. Hello dear Dianne

    This is again a wonderful post, you deserves a big compliment.

    warm greetings and kisses from Holland, Joop

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  3. Hello Dianne, what an entrance, is a marvel.
    Greetings. -

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  4. A great poem with deep feelings of love, full of tenderness.
    Besos.

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  5. Uh oh is right dear Foamy .
    You know I am such a fool, I only have myself to blame. When I care about someone I put too much of myself into that friendship, so much faith in them and I think they will feel the same. They rarely do and obviously he did not.
    I am not bitter and I am not saying I am a victim, however I was more than a little hurt by the way I was so coldly and easily dismissed after such a long aquaintance and what I believed to be a special friendship...
    I have feelings of sadness and disappointment.
    He has a new circle of friends now to charm and dazzle, I am not wanted any more, if I ever was. :(

    xoxoxo ♡

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  6. Hello dear Joop , thank you for your kind and thoughtful words.
    Warm greetings and kisses my friend.

    xoxoxo ♡

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  7. Thank you dear Enrique for your lovely comment.
    Greetings my friend.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  8. Thank you dear Leovi for your kind and thoughtful words. Tenderness yes, but not love, just feelings of hurt and disappointment.
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  9. Amiga poeta.Para muchas personas la vida le resulta muy dura,al llegar a su senitud los sufrimientos pasados salen en sus rotros.
    La foto se hizo en asilo para ancianos desvalidos.
    Abrazos




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  10. so moving words, I could cry !
    wish you a happy weekend Dianne
    bisous

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  11. Amigo Juan , no me extraña que se ve tan triste si ella está en un hogar de ancianos, tan trágico cuando terminar nuestras vidas con demencia.
    Un fuerte abrazo
    xoxoxo ♡

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  12. Thank you Marty dear for your kind and thoughtful words. Don't be sad for me, my tears have stopped now, I am just left with a feeling of hurt and confusion.
    Have a happy weekend too!
    bisous
    xoxoxo ♡

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  13. Hermosas palabras. Un abrazo y feliz fin de semana!

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  14. In woord en beeld heel mooi gedaan. Wat kun je dit toch goed.Super gedaan.

    Groetjes Von

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  15. ✿°•.¸
    A vida tem tantos desencontros... mas está lindo na sua poesia.
    Bom fim de semana!
    Beijinhos.
    Brasil
    ¸.✿°°•.¸.¸•°♡⊱╮╮

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  16. Thank you dear Silvina , for your kind words. Hugs to you too and a happy weekend.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  17. Bedankt lieve Von voor uw vriendelijke woorden ... alles wat ik kan doen is vergeten.
    Hartelijke groet mijn vriend.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  18. Caro Inês , obrigado por suas amáveis ​​palavras. Sim, existem muitos mal-entendidos na vida, mas um homem razoável teria sido mais atencioso e compreensivo.
    Um bom fim de semana.
    beijos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  19. Hurt, anger and disaapointment. If that is what they give you, you are better off without them.

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  20. Hurt, anger and disaapointment. If that is what they give you, you are better off without them.

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  21. Thank you dear J Cosmo for your kind words, they are so true. I am a good, caring and loving person I don't deserve this shabby treatment, I deserve so much better.

    xoxoxo ♡

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  22. Dianne Very admirable this entry is a pleasure going through your blog very

    Greetings from Creativity and imagination photos of José Ramón

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  23. Yes, it is sad and cold loneliness. Sometimes it can be heated only by the heat of the memories.
    Besos.

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  24. Touches my heart.
    With lots of love to you dear Dianne, Mirthe

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  25. Thank you dear José for your thoughtful words.
    Greetings my friend
    xoxoxo ♡

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  26. Thank you dear Leovi , yes, sad and cold loneliness and a feeling of abandonment ... the memories only make it more difficult to bear.
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  27. Thank you dear Mirthe for your kind and thoughtful words.
    Lots of love to you too dear friend, Dianne.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  28. Feelings are the heartbeat of love.

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  29. Yes they are dear Leovi , they keep love alive.
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  30. Hello my dear, again you show us a very interesting point of view, lovely text! remebered me of the song wating on the other side

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  31. Hello Tiago my dear friend, thank you for your kind words. Did you mean the song 'waiting on the other side' by Bruno Mars? Good song.

    xoxoxo ♡

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  32. I have no words, but this appeals to me, you are so good with words and emotions!

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  33. Dear Dianne
    always sad when a friendship ends
    but you will smile again with other new friends, life insurance gives you new,
    and will cheer your heart, you bring new illusions,
    do not look back, always go, life goes by giving you things.
    I'm sure !!

    As always, a beautiful poem,
    full of melancholy.

    happy week for you ;))
    a big hug

    ^^


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  34. Thank you dear Art , you said more than you realise and I appreciate that; these emotions are very real to me at the moment.
    hugs
    xoxoxo ♡

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  35. Elia dearest friend, yes very sad to lose a friendship that meant so much to me...well it was lovely for such a long time, he was, now nothing will ever be the same again.

    I can smile with other friends like you and they will cheer my heart, thank you for your thoughtful words and wishes.

    A happy week for you dear friend. ^^
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  36. Sometimes it is frustrating not to find an explanation.
    Besos.

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  37. Amiga poeta.Tu poema és como un lamento de la soledad emosional en la que estás.
    Un fuerte abrazo

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  38. Los colores de la forografia se verian apagados al lado de tus poemas.
    Abrazos

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  39. Yes, the word is really sad farewell to the beloved.
    Besos.

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  40. Yes very frustrating dear Leovi , I cannot understand why my banishment has been so harsh and final. I did not realise that caring for someone was such a crime.
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  41. Juan , mi poema es triste, estoy triste y confundido, no entiendo por qué me ha abandonado y desestimó de manera tan abrupta y completamente. Yo no haría eso a él. Me mostró poca comprensión y lealtad al final.
    Un fuerte abrazo a mi amigo
    xoxoxo ♡

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  42. Caro Fernando , obrigado por suas amáveis ​​palavras.
    Saudações
    xoxoxo ♡

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  43. Gracias, querido Juan !
    Abrazos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  44. Thanks dear Leovi . yes, my words are really sad and heartfelt.
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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