Monday, June 25, 2012

Love Set Me Free


False hopes betray me
And leave me undone
Not even the stars 
can help me
When I wish upon one
Nothing is the way
It was promised to be
Hope upon prayer
Love let me be
Release my heart
From your promise I sought
Untangle the threads
That bound me so tight
To a love left wanting
That would not be
To love unfulfilled
A love denied
To a love unforgiving
So love set me free ...

Poem: Dianne D ... ♥
Image : Fantasy -  Free HD Wallpaper

45 comments:

  1. Heel mooi subtiel in beeld gebracht...

    Groetjes Von

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  2. Lovely work again..... your are the best Dianne.

    Hugs, Joop

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  3. Yes, so beautiful!
    Warm greetings to you, Mirthe

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  4. Piękne zdjęcie do wiersza dość smutnego, bo o nie spełnionej miłości. Pozdrawiam.
    Beautiful picture to the line quite sad, because of unfulfilled love. Yours.

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  5. Love set me free.... lovely words , Dianne:)

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  6. Amiga Dianne.Tu alma,tu cuerpo,y todos tuis sentidos se desgarran en tu poesia.
    Alguna vez llegarás a encontrar la quietud que tanto necesita.
    Tu comentário a mi fotografia es un verdadero poema.
    Un fuerte abrazo

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  7. Classic piece of work Dear Dianne!
    Exquisite!

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  8. ALLWAYS LOVELY, SWEET DIANNE!!

    Have a wonderful week with colours smile,

    besos para ti♡

    eljardindemiduende ^^

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  9. romantic image and beautiful words !
    wish you a lovely week dianne
    thank you

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  10. Love never listens. That's just the way it is.

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  11. Yes, it is difficult to untangle all the threads covered withthe that love our hearts. Besos.

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  12. Thank you dear friend /t. .

    xoxoxo ♡

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  13. Bedankt lieve Von voor uw attente woorden.
    Hartelijke groeten.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  14. Thank you dear Joop , that is such a lovely thing to say.

    Hugs to you too!

    xoxoxo ♡

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  15. Thank you dear Mirthe for your kind words.
    Warm greetings to you, Dianne.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  16. Giga drogi przyjacielu, dziękuję za życzliwość, tak smutne słowa na miłość niespełniona i tak obraz jest piękny.
    ciepłe pozdrowienia
    xoxoxo ♡
    Giga dear friend, thank you for your kindness, yes sad words for love unfulfilled and yes the image is beautiful.
    Warm greetings
    xoxoxo ♡

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  17. Thank you dear Rahul for your sweet comment.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  18. Juan, por favor querido amigo no te preocupes por mí, sí, estoy triste, pero pronto voy a encontrar la paz y el descanso que tanto necesitan.
    Su fotografía era hermosa, tan digna de mis palabras.
    Un fuerte abrazo
    xoxoxo ♡

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  19. Thank you dear Kunal for your comment, such a lovely thing to say.
    Our SBS television channel which features world movies is having an Indian film festival, very exciting for me. So far I have seen "Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi", "Love Aaj Kal" and "Jodhaa Akbar" and more to come. :)
    xoxoxo ♡

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  20. Thank your Elia dearest friend for your thoughtful words, I shall try to smile with many colours.

    A wonderful week for you too sweet friend!
    besos para ti ♡
    xoxoxo ♡

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  21. Thank you dear Marty for your kind comment; yes the image is romantic, I am so pleased that you enjoyed my words.
    Have a lovely week also dear friend.
    Bisous
    xoxoxo ♡

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  22. Thank you dear J Cosmo for your comment, I guess love does not listen to what we ask of it.
    For such a simple poem, though very heartfelt I had problems with this one.
    The first ten lines came to me from my thoughts yesterday morning, then the rest late last night. I changed the ending many times ... for example, instead of "To a love unforgiving" I had written "To a love so unyielding, Please love set me free"... I could not decide, sometimes it is difficult to decide which is better.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  23. Thank you dear Leovi for your thoughtful words, yes it is difficult to untangle the many threads of love and hope that bind our hearts to someone whom we know does not care for us at all.
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  24. Estimado Fernando , gracias por tu alabanza tipo de mi poema.
    Saludos cordiales.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  25. Sometimes love is not like we want to imagine.
    Besos.

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  26. Amiga mia.Si mis fotografias hacen que tu estado anímico vuele,me siempo bién pagado por ello.
    Un fuerte abrazo

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  27. Thank you dear Leovi , no love is often not how we would imagine it to be, it leaves us wanting and disillusioned.
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  28. Amiga DianneÉn ésta época del año,pasear popr los campos de girasoles,puede producir quietud y nos hace sentir que somos parte de esa naturaleza.
    Un fuerte abrazo

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  29. Once again lovely post, love the sentence: "False hopes betray me" its a big true, sometimes we fool your selfs with hopes and ilusions!

    Kisses =)

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  30. Juan querido amigo, muchas gracias. Si la naturaleza imaginativa de mis poemas mis pensamientos permite volar a muchos lugares, lugares donde encontrar consuelo.
    Un fuerte abrazo
    xoxoxo ♡

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  31. Thank you dear Pantherka for your thoughtful comment.
    Warm greetings
    xoxoxo ♡

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  32. Juan querido amigo, me puedo imaginar lo maravilloso que es en el verano y lo bonito que caminar entre los girasoles hermosos y sentir que son parte de la naturaleza.
    Un fuerte abrazo
    xoxoxo ♡

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  33. Thank you for your sweet comment dear friend Tiago , sometimes others give us hope of more when it was not intended or could never be.
    Kisses
    xoxoxo ♡

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  34. Amiga mia.Tus entradas y tus cariñosos comentários,llegan hacia mi persona con la calidad de un fuerte abrazo.
    Juan

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  35. Hey Dianne..

    Love Aaj Kal and Jodha Akbar are nice movies...which I enjoyed...

    Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi...well...didnt enjoy that much because..I found the concept a bit weird...as in every one knows its the same guy except the girl... :P

    But, all the films have really good music.

    Glad that you enjoyed them!

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  36. Yes, being blind to a false hope is truly devastating. Love for a person we can stop seeing reality and feel alone in our desires. Sometimes it's good help from a very trustworthy person. Kisses.

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  37. Juan querido amigo, muchas gracias, soy una persona cariñosa y siempre disfrutar de sus fantasías e imágenes.
    Un fuerte abrazo
    xoxoxo ♡

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  38. Hi Kunal dear friend ...

    I am so pleased that you enjoyed Love Aaj Kal and Jodhaa Akbar.

    Yes, the concept was a little unbelievable in Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi since everyone knew it was the same guy except the girl... but it was a bit of fantasy and I was swept up in the story.
    It also demonstrates just how versatile Shahrukh Khan is as an actor and dancer. I also loved the music in all three.

    Thanks for stopping by and have a great weekend!
    xoxoxo ♡

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  39. Thank you dear Leovi for your thoughtful words and advice.
    I must change and be more realistic and stop putting so much hope in my dreams and wishes.
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  40. Yes, I understand. Few of my poems end up where I expect them to. The Headlights, for example. But I am usually happy with the outcomes in the end.

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  41. Dear J Cosmo , thank you, I am pleased that you understand. I have the inspiration for a poem and the emotions which I would like to express but the words do not always come to me leaving the poem lacking the feelings I wanted to convey.
    You are a great poet, I love your 'Headlights' poem, I knew it was about eyes and feelings.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  42. What a wonderful poem.. Love should always be free. Only then we can open ourselves to it with all our heart!

    warm hugs and best wishes
    Mona

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  43. Thank you dear Mona for your sweet words, yes, love which is conditional and not given freely is no love at all.
    Warm hugs and best wishes to you too dear friend.
    Dianne.
    xoxoxo ♡

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