Saturday, November 19, 2011

Each Time We Must Part


Tears fill my eyes
Each time we must part

I have not had enough of you

Enough to fill my heart
I need so much more of you

We're only at the start
I look in your direction

As you leave and walk away

Please turn around and see me

I want you to stay

Our kiss is not enough
T
o take this sadness from my heart
I cannot bear it

Your absence breaks my heart

Please turn around and see me

And walk back this way
Please come back to me

Take this emptiness from my heart

A few more precious moments
To last whilst you're away

And ask you this question

Please,why can't you stay?

Poem: Dianne D ... ♥
Image: 'Man Walking Away'
Photo from Internet no copyright found.

61 comments:

  1. zal hij nog terug komen..?? heel mooi gedaan.

    Groetjes Von

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  2. Fantastic work Dianne..... shall he comeback ?

    wish you a lovely weekend.

    warm greetings, Joop

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  3. Delicious and sad farewell, farewell to love because it's very sad. kisses.

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  4. A heart breaking touching verse! Beautifully penned..

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  5. Hello Dianne,
    What a wonderful picture, it is worth a text, such expression!
    I have a problem on the photos of followers, she caught the picture of Floriana, a black shirt and sunglasses. The photos of the new followers appear and then vanish back to the Floriana (blog aqualung).
    A big hug

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  6. Dianne Interesting photography with this excellent writing. Thanks for visiting happy weekend
    José Ramón greetings from
    Creativity and imagination photos of Jose Ramon

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  7. Hi Diana, absences always leave an empty soul, beautiful poem,
    you have a happy weekend.
    a hug.

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  8. A heart breaking scene that is so beautifully penned, Dianne! I really *love* it and can feel the depth of the emotions involved. The image is perfect! Congrats on another gorgeous writing, dear! ~x♥x~

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  10. I always love the subtley in your poems Dianne, even when they show an element of sadness.. I think its your underlying passion for nature, soft and gentle which continues to make your words dreamy and visual.

    What a great picture to use with the poem. As soon as I read the poem I kept thinking, black and white scene, maybe a soldier getting on a train, girl on platform.. Your pic is perfect!!!

    "I look in your direction
    As you leave and walk away
    Please turn around and see me
    I want you to stay"

    I kept thinking, turn around, come on turn around, you can do it.. but he kept on walking.. Some blokes just havent a clue sometimes :)

    Great stuff Dianne. Take care x

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  11. Hartelijk dank voor uw lieve reactie lieve von , ik ben blij je genoten hebt van mijn gedicht. Hij zal niet terug komen, hij is een hoogtepunt van vele herinneringen van iemand die ik liefde.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  12. Thank you dear Joop for your lovely comment ... no he won't come back, 'he' is a culmination of many memories.

    Have a lovely weekend dear friend.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  13. Thank you dear Leovi for your sweet comment, yes farewells are always sad, especially when love ends.
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  14. Thank you dear Lee for your lovely comment.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  15. Thank you dear Rahul for your lovely comment, yes it is a poem of heartbreak but I am OK. :-)
    xoxoxo ♡

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  16. Thank you dear Antonio for your lovely comment. I wrote the poem first and was very fortuante to find this image.
    Yes, I have been experiencing problems with my followers list,the photo of the last person there keeps disappearing then returning. Now you will see that Floriana from Aqualung has joined my list of followers, I wonder if her photo will stay there. It could just be a problem with Google.
    A big hug
    xoxoxo ♡

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  17. Thank you dear José , for your lovely comment. Yes, this image is wonderful, I wrote the poem and was very fortunate to find this photo after searching for something appropriate on the Internet and this is almost perfect. There was another that I would have chosen but it was copyrighted.
    Happy weekend to you too!
    xoxoxo ♡

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  18. Thank you dear Ricardo for your lovely comment, yes, absences always leave an empty soul, I knew you would feel this in my words.
    A happy weekend to you too and a hug.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  19. Thank you dear Fiona for your glowing words of praise, I am so pleased that you loved my poem, yes it is very deep with emotions.
    The image is perfect, though another that I would have liked was copyrighted.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  20. Jasmin , dear friend, yes I have poured out my heart, but do not be sad, I am fine, many memories past and present were the reason for this poem.
    Thank you for your beautiful words and lovely wish for a dream carrying me up to the stars, where one day, one small star ★ may give me the answer I am seeking.
    Love and greetings, Dianne.
    xoxoxoxo ♡

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  21. Thank you dear Paul for your beautiful comment and praise of this poem and the content of other poems and my writing style. You are a very kind and gentle person.
    Yes, the picture is perfect, yes I searched for a black and white photo as this is what would convey the sadness of the poem, you are very perceptive.
    I wanted him to turn around and see her and see how heart-breaking this separation was for her, she did not want to let him go, she wanted to feel his warmth and closeness again.
    Thank you,you take care too.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  22. In this poem, there is an undeniable presence of love.

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  23. Thank you dear Olga for your kind words, yes, there is a presence of love.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  24. oh Dianne, I have got sentimental whit this... it's speek ing so closed to me.... really great

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  25. nice one, d

    × × ×

    /t.

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  26. Thank you dear Laura for your thoughtful words, I am so pleased that my poem spoke to you.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  27. Thank you dear Áurea for visiting and for your kind comment.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  28. Thanks dear /t.

    so sweet of you to say!

    xoxoxo ♡

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  29. Amiga Dianne.En la composición de tu poema se nota la sencibilidad de tus sentimientos.
    Tu amor hacia la cultura te hace elevar.
    Un fuerte abrazo

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  30. Amiga Diane.El abatimiento y la desesperación fué lo que yo intente dar en esa fotografia.
    Aceptaste en tu comemtário
    Un fuerte abrazo
    Juan

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  31. El campesino cuida su viñedo,exactamemte igual que tu cvuidas tus poemas.

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  32. Hi Dianne I re-read your sad but beautiful poem. Besos.

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  33. Hello Dianne, that most beautiful entry,
    Beautiful poem, even when displaying sadness. The image is prefect to accompany the poem.
    Greetings .-

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  34. yes why ?? it's so sad but really beautiful how you write feelings !
    perfect image to that poem !
    bisous Dianne

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  35. Amigo Juan , gracias, sí, mi sensibilidad y los recuerdos de amor se escriben en mis poemas.
    Un fuerte abrazo
    xoxoxo ♡

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  36. Amigo Juan , sí, yo podía ver la desesperación y la desesperanza en la fotografía de la mujer en los escalones.
    Un fuerte abrazo
    xoxoxo ♡

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  37. Juan , querido amigo, si los agricultores tiende su viña con amor y cariño como lo hago yo mis poemas.
    Un fuerte abrazo
    xoxoxox ♡

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  38. Thank you Leovi dear friend for returning once more to read my poem, that is so kind of you.
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  39. Thank you dear Enrique for your very thoughtful comment. I am happy that you enjoyed my poem and yes the image is perfect, I was so fortunate to find it.
    Greetings
    xoxoxo ♡

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  40. Why Marty dear friend? I don't know why. Thank you for your thoughtful words about my writing and yes the image is perfect.
    bisous Marty
    xoxoxo ♡

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  41. Dianne.Hasta los colores de mi fotografia hacen despertar en ti tus sentimientos poeticos.
    Un fuerte abrazo

    Juan

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  42. The worst are those who know goodbyes are forever. Besos.

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  43. Amigo Juan, sí, hay muchos colores en mis poemas. Algunos inspirados en sus fotografías.
    Un fuerte abrazo
    xoxoxo ♡

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  44. Yes dear Leovi , those 'goodbyes' are the saddest of all.
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  45. Thank you ashok for your kind comment. :)
    xoxoxo ♡

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  46. Delicious and sensitiv.
    I love your words, love in each corner...

    Thanks for this moment,
    my sweet Dianne,

    besos para ti

    (eljardindemiduende) ^^

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  47. Wow! Superb picture and an incredibly beautiful poem!

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  48. Thank you dear Elia my sweet friend for your very thoughtful comment. I am so happy that you loved this poem.
    Lovely to see you here. :)
    Besos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  49. Thank you dear Kunal for your thoughtful comment.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  50. Thank you dear Art for your kind and thoughtful words.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  51. Hi Dana I leave a greeting,
    you have a happy weekend.
    a hug.

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  52. Thank you dear Ricardo for your greeting.
    I wish you a happy weekend too! :)
    xoxoxo ♡

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  53. º°❤
    Olá, amiga!

    Sua poesia continua tão sensível e bonita como sempre!...

    Bom fim de semana!
    Beijinhos. º° ✿
    ♫° Brasil
    ·.♪
    ❤♥

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  54. Olá, Inês querida amiga, obrigado pelo seu comentário lindo.
    Bom fim de semana!
    Beijos
    xoxoxo ♡

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  55. Do you think it's easy for me?

    The entire time I have "Should I Stay Or Should I Go" by The Clash rattling through my tiny noggin.

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