Monday, February 16, 2009

GO AWAY



No going back now
you have sealed my fate
Burnt all the bridges
slammed the gate

The path is blocked now
you have closed the door
Our bond together
is no more

No forgiveness in you
it hardly seems fair
you judged me so harshly
its so hard to bear

What a shame you didn't open your eyes
open your heart and realise
All the loveliness here
I hold inside

All the love that I have
is all for you
No-one has touched my heart
the way you do

One careless lie
amongst many truths
Cant you look past this
and give me your trust

I'm sorry I hurt you
I should not have lied
You have shut me out now
please let me inside

Please don't abandon me
let me in from the dark
Please forgive me
take me back to your heart

One indiscretion
and you throw me away
After all that we shared
You say" GO AWAY"...

Poem by: Dianne
Drawing: Weeping Girl by Dianne
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31 comments:

  1. darkfoamFebruary 16, 2009 at 11:38 PM

    you have such a knack for poetry, dianne..
    is it okay to say that i enjoyed this poem. it's sad and i'm hoping it's not too much about you.

    very lovely sketch, btw!

    ♥

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  2. dianneFebruary 17, 2009 at 12:07 AM

    Foamie dear, yes it is okay that you enjoyed the poem, it is about me, it seems I can never get it right. ♥
    Thanks, I did the drawing in Microsoft paint, quite different to holding a brush, but I will have to practice more. ♥

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  3. Little LambFebruary 17, 2009 at 12:46 AM

    that's sad.

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  4. puerileuwaiteFebruary 17, 2009 at 2:05 AM

    Lamby stole my comment. But I choose to work on our trust issues. Perhaps I am too trusting that way.

    I truly don't know what to say. Sorry. Good poem though.

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  5. Little LambFebruary 17, 2009 at 3:03 AM

    You're not going to get rid of us any time soon.

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  6. bonemanFebruary 17, 2009 at 3:23 AM

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  7. bonemanFebruary 17, 2009 at 4:10 AM

    heck, just leave him behind and find another.
    That can't be so hard for a wife and Mother.
    Perhaps the next guy will be just the thing
    To make you want to go out and sing!

    Tears never solve anything, if you want to know,
    Although sometimes a nice release, then get up and go.
    There's a whole world out there waiting for you.
    Don't whine about some dummy; you've better things to do.

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  8. ANNA-LYSFebruary 17, 2009 at 5:23 AM

    Ohhh Dianne
    so much created beauty
    out of deep sorrow.

    ((kram))

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2009 at 9:06 AM

    all poets
    must suffer...

    congratulations

    <3

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  10. dianneFebruary 17, 2009 at 9:26 AM

    Thanks dear Lil Lambie it is sad, very sad...♥

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  11. dianneFebruary 17, 2009 at 9:29 AM

    Thanks Puggles my sweet, I'm glad you like the poem, don't be sorry its the story of my life. ♥

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  12. dianneFebruary 17, 2009 at 9:30 AM

    Thanks you sweet Lil Lamb , yes please stick around. ♥

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  13. dianneFebruary 17, 2009 at 9:57 AM

    Well Boney , very pretty poem, but I don't happen to be a wife , I haven't been a wife or lover now for eleven years.

    Its a shame some people have to be so harsh and judgemental and cant see all the lovely qualities I possess instead of focusing on one careless misrepresentation that I made; you see he liked the photo so much I didn't have the heart to tell him it wasn't me.

    There wont be a next guy ... what put my heart out there in my hands, bare my soul only to have it and my hopes crushed again?
    I don't think so...no thanks I've had enough. ♥

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  14. dianneFebruary 17, 2009 at 10:00 AM

    Thanks Anna-Lys dear, it is such a shame that all of my best poems come from sorrow.
    I think its time to just give up. ♥

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  15. dianneFebruary 17, 2009 at 10:07 AM

    Thanks dear /t.
    yes all poets must suffer...
    but I think this poet has suffered enough...♥

    Every time my heart is broken another little piece of me dies...♥

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  16. darkfoamFebruary 17, 2009 at 11:18 AM

    i'm sorry you are hurting, dianne ..
    ♥

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  17. CorbyFebruary 17, 2009 at 11:25 AM

    Dianne,

    I am sorry to hear about your heartbreak. I hope someday soon you will find someone wise enough to cherish your heart as the rare jewel that it is.

    -Corby

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  18. dianneFebruary 17, 2009 at 11:48 AM

    Corby dear, thank you for your kind words that is very sweet of you...I'm just about finished, I have finally given up. ♥
    As I said 'hope floats and is gone'...

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  19. dianneFebruary 17, 2009 at 1:07 PM

    Thank you Foamie dear, yes I am hurting, don't know what to do, have been vacuuming and ironing to take my mind off of it...looking at images on the internet, sent some e-mails, now I'm just crying all over my keyboard.
    You would think at my age I would I would be more resilient and better able to handle the situation, but it seems I am not.
    You are so sweet to me and thoughtful and I do appreciate it. ♥

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  20. J Cosmo NewberyFebruary 17, 2009 at 1:25 PM

    I'm sorry that you are feeling so much pain still. Poetry will help.

    (Still can't get that heart thing to work. Must be hidden somewhere else on a Mac keyboard.)

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  21. dianneFebruary 17, 2009 at 5:09 PM

    Yes dear J Cosmo poetry does help and thanks for your words of kindness. ♥

    The heart ♥
    press the alt key hold it then press the number 3 on the numeric keyboard at the the right hand side then release. It wont work with the numbers above the letters.
    Here is a link
    for ascii codes

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  22. LeeFebruary 17, 2009 at 10:09 PM

    I do hope things improve for you, Dianne.

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  23. dianneFebruary 17, 2009 at 10:30 PM

    Thanks dear Lee but I don't see how...I am just so over being hurt,tired of being unhappy and I cant take much more. ♥

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  24. J Cosmo NewberyFebruary 18, 2009 at 11:09 AM

    ♡♡♡
    Had to compromise...
    The Mac keyboard doesn't seem to like the alt-3 thing, so I used TextEdit and it's special characters and cut and pasted.✔✔✔

    Thank you.

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  25. AnonymousFebruary 18, 2009 at 1:24 PM

    Do not let your heart be troubled, look to all the wonderful things you have in your life, and find solace there. Joy comes to those who welcome and accept it, don't turn your back.......

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  26. dianneFebruary 18, 2009 at 5:16 PM

    You are welcome dear j cosmo , I think your hearts look far nicer than the black heart. ♥

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  27. dianneFebruary 18, 2009 at 5:20 PM

    Anonymous ,you keep leaving comments here but I don't know who you are?
    Do I know you?
    That is very nice advice but just at the moment I feel no solace in the things that I have...I just feel like turning my back on the world. ♥

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  28. Aren O. TýrFebruary 21, 2009 at 10:15 AM

    "I just feel like turning my back on the world."

    I have black days like that too.

    I tend to retreat even deeper than normal into books and music on such days, hopefully to re-emerge a few days later in a better frame of mind.

    Still, at least every new day brings new possibilities in principle, if not always in practice! :-)

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  29. dianneFebruary 21, 2009 at 11:28 AM

    Hi Aren thanks for stopping by to see me.

    I do retreat into music that comforts me, yes, just lately I've felt like turning my back on the world but it doesn't work, someone always has demands which I have to attend to. No peace I'm afraid.

    Yes one can hope that a new day will bring something resembling happiness, I just look for little glimpses of hope so that I don't get too mired down in this sadness. ♥

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  30. LeoviJune 27, 2011 at 8:01 AM

    A poem where feelings are exposed to the surface, without disguise and without masks. Very nice. A hug.

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  31. dianneJune 27, 2011 at 11:19 AM

    Thanks dear Leovi , no disguising my feelings here, I was angry and hurt, but thank goodness time heals and lets us forget and move on ... it wasn't to be, we were not a good match for each other.

    besos xoxoxo ♡

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